50 pages of my JLA Vs Avengers book, feedback welcome!

[JAM_ONIT]

thank you for the kind words

Hey get that thread up and share with us, great to have support of new regulars, and of the old ones too (666MOP)

new page, recap time






Time to move on to the next segment of the story, oh yeah

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Hell yeah. This is looking badass. When are you adding some dialogue?

[JAM_ONIT]

part 1 of a double-page spread



I have the general idea of what's being said, but actual finished dialogue..maybe after the completed second run on pencils

[krushjudgement]

I have to tell you man, these are some great pages.

I say follow your heart, but I'd love to see you rock an original creation. You see, George Perez gets paid to draw Iron Man, so that quote doesn't quite work for you yet. Unless marvel commissioned you to do this, you'll probably get a nice letter telling you to stop if you ever try and publish these.

Still, I think your passion is inspiring.

[JAM_ONIT]

Welcome aboard, and glad you like the stuff and actually took the time to comment.

We interpret the Perez quote differently, which is fine. Here's why I feel it does fit me at this time. I look at it as referring to the intrinsic motivational rewards, not the extrinsic, and since their wasn't a economic factor mentioned, I didn't consider that into the quote's equation, but I do see your point of view if you were to expand that quote into the bigger picture.

Now to what I really came here for. I'd like to run by some ideas about the next 5-10 pages
-the next panel is going to show above ground, the hall of justice is under attack and the leftover surviving members of jla, jsa, titans, and outsiders being overtaken by a team of villains led by Count Nefaria and Maxima(or I was going to use Superboy Prime, but maybe I should have Ultrainiac 7 bring him into the book later on at the heroes big stand)

Alan Scott and John Stewart are protecting the hall with a giant green bubble, and below Cap comes up with an idea, he asks Zatanna, Strange, Wanda, and Dr. fate(who appears), to create an enchantment along with Thor's hammer, to transport the entire hall of justice to another dimension for retreat so that regrouping and plans of coordinated efforts can be made. They can do it, but it's going to take some time, time they don't have. So an already beaten down WW, Supes, and Cap, head topside to help buy some time

here's the list of some of the considered villains and heroes

Juggernaught
Bizarro
Absorbing Man
Parasite
Titania
Bullseye
Bane
Kraven
Lady Deathstrike
Taskmaster
Speed Demon
Graviton
Deathlok
Wrecking crew

The possible dc heroes left

Martin Manhunter
Cap Marvel
Vixen
Batgirl
Robin(drake)
Black Lightning
Hal Jordan
Power Girl
Supergirl
Flash
Troia
Wonder Girl
Geo-Force

I know i want to see-
a shot of Kraven vs Vixen, and Titania going at Power Girl

Nefaria will get the better of a battered Supes, who just finished beating Rulk not too long ago, and here are a couple of directions I can go

1- have Sentry(and maybe a couple of of avengers) appear after receiving Caps distress call for backup from any available Avengers, and have Sentry vs Count Nefaria
or
2-If Superboy Prime is used here, I will have JSA kingdom come Superman show up to take on Nefaria, and Sentry will come to take on Superboy Prime

So the major things in consideration are

1-Nefaria/maxima or nefaria/superboy prime led villains?

2-Sentry vs Count Nefaria
or
3-kingdom come Superman vs Nefaria, and Sentry vs Superboy Prime

4-villain/hero line-ups

What do you think and or any extra ideas?

[krushjudgement]

Thanks for the kind words man. If you're interested you can see the comics I'm working on in thread titled "Nicky and Zane, King of Pain" right here in the writer artist showcase.

Feel free to comment please.

I'll keep checking back here.

[Hybrid2]

Cant stand Superboy prime,but then i cant stand Sentry.

but I love KC Superman.

[JAM_ONIT]

Superboy prime /KC Superman option it is, maybe i'll have SBPrime boosted into black costumed SMPrime later on

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[originalJAM]

Not bad stuff.

JAM,.....

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[steve2275]

wow
who who is fighting who? in 193

[Avenger08]

Damn this is impressive stuff.