50 pages of my JLA Vs Avengers book, feedback welcome!

[JAM_ONIT]

this didn't work last night, let's try it now
new page mini re-cap time

[JAM_ONIT]

what awesome plot device shall we use to save the mortally wounded Batman later, hmmmm..... can we say
Darkclaw

[Gumbo Maximillian]

Darkclaw?

Combine him with Wolverine again?

Have him somehow get a jumpstart from Deadpool? He does have a connection with Wolverine and a healing factor after all.

Have the symbiote decide it likes him better and jump to him and heal his injuries?

Innate Bat-awesomeness for the win and he just shrugs off the wound like the manly sob that he is?

[JAM_ONIT]

Well I hate to give up plot points, but here is what's about to happen
Supes, knowing Bats is dying, is going to muster up the strength/anger to beat Rulk and as he does Zatanna and Dr Strange are going to show up, immobilize the villains long enough to teleport the beaten and wounded heroes to safety. At some point Bats will be in stasis and when Wolvie shows up, the sorcerers will have tapped into the power and knowledge of a time egg and use it to merge Wolvie and Bats into Darkclaw for a while in order to heal Bruce of his injuries

Someone who wanted to input into the book asked for the existing overall plot somewhere else, so I thought I'd share what I have so far

[quote author=Anti-Villain link=topic=159886.msg3124222#msg3124222 date=1234389495]
Is there a story rundown somewhere so I can figure out how to incorperate the battle in a way that works?

Well my original plan was to incorporate my pages with the 21 original ones that George had, to help complete the original story, which is why the time egg is involved, and the recent series did leave open a door for a time egg story.

Basically, Something happens to activate/disrupt the time egg (open to plot suggestions), either it splits/self replicates itself across time/dimensions causing parallel places/earths to start merging Gotham/Wakanda, Asgard/New Genesis, etc (Battle Section 1)

The heroes may or may not remember each other (not sure yet), but for some reason (open to plot suggestions) once the worlds are merged they go after one another , like Wolvie hunting Bats down in his own cave etc (Battle Section 2) even the villains take each other on

Info is gathered about what's going on, and that's where we have the Scarlet Witch/ Zatanna pages lead into the time chases/battles to collect the time eggs for each respective side (Battle Section 3), now as to what plot device makes them continue to fight each other for the eggs instead of being sensible and teaming up then is (open to suggestions)

Some top tier villains get a hold of some of the eggs and tap into their power, Ultrainiac 7 creates the Sentinomacs, enlists villains, hunt down the heroes and take over, and the heroes are forced into hiding, striking back in small resistance numbers. On one such strike to save someone like Lois, who is being used as bait, Supes and Supergirl or Powergirl will attempt a rescue, only to run into the all new manga style kryptonite based Sentinomacs who overtake the weakened two and a heartfelt death of Kara takes places as a helpless Supes watches(Wow,that's original LOL). They are about to kill Supes, when he is saved at the last second by Darkclaw, who tries to make his way with a battered Supes to a safety portal. They make it to the sewers as some villains appear (maybe Deapool rematch, and/or some Sabretooth etc, maybe Daken too), he throws Supes through, deactivates it, turns to face Pool/Tooth, pops his claws, and a we get some very intense action

The heroes rally for a final strike as they get help when booster and spidey pop up with the LSH, all the Ultimates heroes, Image and Wildstorm heroes

The JLA and Avengers then go take on Thanos and Darkseid, where we can finally see some Thor vs Darkseid and some Supes vs Thanos

Once the eggs have been brought back together, the only way for all the multi-verse worlds can survive is for the Spectre or some cosmic being to help Sentry harness his true potential power with the egg and allow for the book ending with there being a main earth with all main companies characters co-existing,

and there being many parallel earth versions like back in the old days. Imagine spidey/spawn, ultimate cap/earth-1 cap, group meetings between JLA/X-men/Authority/Avengers etc

[Hybrid2]

Awsome!!!

when will this be finished?
any idea?

if you have to kill someone. kill Supergirl. not Power Girl. please. :-)

[Adrian Tullberg]

if you have to kill someone. kill Supergirl. not Power Girl. please. :-)

Aren't they essentially the same person?

[pryde15]

Aren't they essentially the same person?

Not really. I mean technically, yes they are the same, but once you get to know the characters they are very different.

[JAM_ONIT]

Yes sir, yet another conclusive ending to a major match-up, sorry Rulk fans, but my Supes is more closer to Pre-Crisis than post

[originalJAM]

I came up with a new concept--- How about you creating your own characters/story and not using characters/stories that credited ARTISTS/WRITERS used,created and spent their whole careers creating!

I think we'd like to see you create your own characters now and story line----
Time to cut the embelical cord

Be ORIGINAL!

JAM,.........

[JAM_ONIT]

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Looking neat, man. Keep 'em coming.

[MailOrderClone]

I kind-of find myself agreeing with JAM (Original) up there, although for different reasons. I think that the Marvel/DC superteam battle is great and all, don't get me wrong, but I simply feel that JAM (ONIT) could create some very entertaining comics working with a batch of new characters, ones that he could actually potentially get published.

In fact, I'd be willing to work with him myself if he were interested. I'm sure that alot of writers around here would.

[JAM_ONIT]

As always, thanks for tuning in

I found this great George Perez quote that I happen to agree with



here's the new one

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Totally badass, man. Thanx for sharing.

[tonyk11]

Hey man, your work is great! I'm trying myself (little later in life, but better late than never) to get some work going on some original characters in an ongoing book. I've thoroughly enjoyed the pencils.... Man, I love good pencil work. Nothing like it in any other medium. I think, maybe, the most intimate type of art. Simple, and to the point. Anyway, I may try to set up a thread when I get some stuff on board. Take care, and happy story-telling.