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ChristianJCote
Art: By and large, I liked the art in this comic, and prefer it to Bachalo's work in WatXM. It's a bit more restrained and clean, which I think Bachalo can afford to be given how far he's drifted over the years into heavier and heavier stylisation. His greatest weakness right now, I think, is that when he short-hands something, like the human form for example, he really short-hands it and things can get ugly and blotty pretty quick when he does this too much, and that tends to be the case during some of his action scenes. Sometimes it can come off as charming, but most of the time it just makes me think about other really talented artists who put effort into every aspect of the frame. Bachalo can do this too, so I think a bit more effort on his part to produce a more finished product could make his work here a true return to the form.
Dialogue: I must concede to disliking Bendis' writing more often than not, but when it does fit the cast and tone, it fits very well. I don't think it comes out very well here. He has this passion for repeating simple statements (You're trying to kill Scott Summers? That's your plan? You're trying to kill Scott Summers. And I'm telling you that if you kill him all you will do is martyr him. No one's trying to kill anybody. Etc. There is more talk of killing Scott Summers the next page too, for your reading pleasure.). Basically, once you've read one of Bendis' dialogues, you've read all of them, just with the subjects and predicates swapped around to fit the simple plot/theme of each book.
Plot: Let me just get this out of the way: I'll be surprised as hell if Magneto isn't playing the SHIELD. It's so obvious that one might feel encouraged to think it's intentionally so, but no, I'm pretty sure it's just super-fucking-obvious and that's that. I AM, however, extremely excited to see Maria Hill again and I hope that she's a recurring character in this revolution plot line. Speaking of which, Bendis doesn't reach too deep here, drawing on his tried and true tropes of questioning the established authority, setting up 'average people' as being almost sheep-like in their support of underdogs (Sorry to tell you this, Bendis, but Scarlet is a moron and a grotesque mockery of real life efforts to right social injustices and fight abuse of power. I reject your infantile view of the world, one that belies the fact that you write comic books for a living instead of coordinating real life social movements.) Anyways, it's a shallow premise that we're told to accept, and so I wish I could just move on from it to other elements of the plot but... there aren't any. It's the first issue. There's no antagonist yet and the trajectory is pretty vague. What are Cyclops goals, really? Does he actually have any besides plucking up and training new mutants? Bendis needs to provide something more tension-inducing here, but I can be patient and wait for that.
As for the characters, I'll just provide a quick run-down. Nobody particularly shines, there's not really much room for that here, but only Emma really bothers me. She's not simply under-utilised, she's just... useless. Presumably Bendis is aiming for a state of being compromised with regards to her, not just as far as her powers go but emotionally as well, but without taking that beyond conjecture himself she's just not interesting. I also think that Bendis and Bachalo both stumble a bit where the healer mutant is concerned. He's still got no identity to me and his powers are extremely vague and... hand-waved. He could've been handled better, and if he used his powers to heal Magneto then it should've had some sort of visual cue, not necessarily dazzling rays of holy light but... anything. Tempus is being played up as the most important of the new mutants so we'll have to wait and see if Bendis can give her a personality to go with it. Speaking of powerful characters with no personality, the strangest thing to me (after Emma) had to be Magik. She didn't seem herself in this issue. She lacked a certain decisiveness that we've come to expect from her and that flies in the face of her getting more powerful as a result of the Phoenix Force. Again, it's just the first issue, but I think Magik's relative lack of characterisation speaks to a trend among the cast in this issue, and hopefully Bendis will let them be more distinct in time.
I find it hard to grade first issues, so I won't here. I like the art and I'm excited to see SHIELD playing a role. I'm not as excited for the actual X-Men, however, and a light case of Bendis Dialogue makes me a bit concerned for what's to come. All in all, I'm calling this one average, and I think it's going to have to start doing something interesting or it stands to be overshadowed by ANXM.
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