In Death of Spider-Man, the pain Aunt May, Gwen and MJ felt in losing Peter was the payoff. It showed us that all of this is real, and it matters. In Dying Wish, nobody cares, and worse still, Peter was written so painfully out of character that he actually approved of Ock taking over his identity. (A few issues ago, he smashed Morbius without even a moment to let him explain himself. Morbius, who is practically a saint beside Doctor Octopus.)
But it's okay if you like it, and it feels genuine for you. These are just my thoughts.