One of the reasons I tend to skim stuff not directly affecting Mack is that I want to knock out as much chance of accidentally having Mack know details of stuff he really shouldn't know. That's also the reason I tend to write Mack chaining together facts to figure things out - it makes the process of how I can claim he figured that out fairly transparent, keeping him believable. It's also the real reason I had him do all that spying: That way I wouldn't have to worry about the space shenanigans for a while. I could just go "Did it happen within a 400' radius? (bigger than a lot of buildings) Then I've got an alibi for how he knows this."



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