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    Default Gift Revolver comic art

    Whats up guys. My name is Gift. Just joined this forum. Excited to share thoughts and work with everyone. Here is a page out of a book that were doing called "Gift Revolver". I pencil, ink , color,edit and do the text. My brother Supreme Logic writes it.. You can click the page to read the book. We are updating every two weeks. Thanks guys.Feel free to comment on it with whatever comes to mind. www.giftrevolvercomics.com

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    Lowe/Piece/Understatement Artycool8or's Avatar
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    Great stuff.
    The art is decent, so is the coloring and the writing.
    I prefer more background art, but others might enjoy it as it is.
    However, the lettering is below standard.
    The Font used is not working for me, and the occasional small letters mixed with capital letters are one: hard to follow, two: draw in too much attention on themselves, rather than being an "invisible" narrator. This is not just a personal taste, but standard norm. You might want to change that.

    Otherwise, keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.

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    Thanks mate for the work u just share it with us the loveable maniacal creeps
    In brightest day, in blackest night,
    No evil shall escape my sight
    Let those who worship evil's might,
    Beware my power... Green Lantern's light

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    Thanks Arty. I agree with the backround art. I have yet to even attempted to tackle some backround perspective. I need to learn. I liked the narration text style, but I understand what your saying. My brother kind of said something similar. It appeared dark and stylized to me. I may have missed the mark on that. Any sites you recommend for font. Or better a font you think might help. I think your right, doesnt come off as an invisible narrator. Ill post another page. Please give me feedback.. Does this look extremely amatuer?

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    Scurlogg, lol. Maniacal creeps. Im enjoying looking at everyones work. Inspiring. Barely trying to take a stab at this comic book stuff. Feel free to tell me whats garbage.. Im going to post another page..

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    Default Here is another page of "Gift Revolver" the web comic

    Here is another page I did guys. colors,inks, pencils, text... Does this look respectable as a product? Angles and anatomy? Anything you want to say. Im fairly new to this. 5 months in at attempting continous story telling and drawing comics period.
    www.giftrevolvercomics.com

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    Lowe/Piece/Understatement Artycool8or's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gift Revolver View Post
    Any sites you recommend for font.
    Here is the best site for the purpose.
    Thanks to Nate Piekos who has some great Fonts for download for free.
    Blambot

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    Thanks Art. Gonna check this out now!

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    Default Page from Gift Revolver the web comic

    Gift Revolver the web comic. Just sharing another page with all the fam here. Feel free to say anything you like! Hearing comments is cool. Hows everyone doing?
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    Default Gift Revolver comic art

    Hey whats up folks. Just posting some new work from my webcomic. Peep it!http://www.giftrevolvercomics.com/Click image for larger version. 

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    Default Gift Revolvre the comic latest page art

    Heres another page of my work. GIFT REVOLVER the comic. Up for anything you want to say. Appreciate it, and everyone who participates! Issue one is complete. You can read it here.http://www.giftrevolvercomics.com/Click image for larger version. 

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    Default Gift Revolver #2 comic cover

    Here is the cover I did for our second issue. Online comic. Issue one available in print soon.. Click image for larger version. 

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    Default Gift Revolver #2 page 3 art

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ID:	111821WHats up folks? Hows everyone doing? Just sharing a new page I penciled, inked and colored for our book. Check it out. Thanks!
    http://www.giftrevolvercomics.com

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    Default Gift Revolver page art. latest work..

    Here is the recent page I did. Penciled, inked and colored. Sharing in hopes of catching some eyes. Thank you fam! Click image for larger version. 

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    Default My latest page from Gift Revolver the comic book

    I got some good feedback about things im doing wrong here. Sharing with you guys. Feel free to say what you like! Thank you fam.... Click image for larger version. 

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