On one hand, for me it works better if there wasn't a five year jump. Hal is annoying in the JL book. I find it hard to believe that no one on the team felt the need to smack him around before.
On the other hand, if Hal's behavior never changed in all of those five years. If like in the first arc he kept hitting on Di, and kept being arrogant/patronizing around Di, but it took until now for her to snap? Girl's got some serious patience and control.



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