| For instance, we are told about Peter's debut as a wrestler when he gets introduced on the late night TV show, but we never actually see the wrestling match itself, which in the original story provides a great action set-piece. Likewise, we get a rather pointless and very necessary 3-page scene in which we see Peter's "daydream" about where he pictures his fame as Spider-Man will lead him. Also, I agree that this didn't effectively drive home the point that Peter ignored Uncle Ben's advice after getting his powers, and I think that while his final confrontation with the Burglar was effectively set-up, it was ruined with Peter deciding to monologue his feelings when silent panels and letting Neil Edwards art show emotion would have been far more effective. Also, the new character of Daily Bugle reporter Katy Kiernan? I realize that her story arc is supposed to be that she eventually has a change of heart about Spidey, but she has no motive to smear Spidey as viciously as she does in the beginning. Even Jonah cautions her that they should tone it down somewhat because they can't completely "bite the hands that feeds them." |
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