Been working on this story for awhile, basically it's a fantasy epic I want to tell about two black magician chicks who try to summon the beast of apocalypse to earth but get the spell wrong and summon in the beast of world peace and utopia instead. Conversely there is an angel who trained 3000 years to perform the ritual to summon the Utopia beast, but gets it wrong and accidentally brings in the beast of apocalypse. Hilarity will hopefully ensue, let me know critiques and any advice, what you like, what you dont etc etc