Great job at concisely explaining everything for new readers, as well. Your imagery is also gorgeous; phrases like "ambient electrical energy", "freezing rain assails," and "icy rains pelt her skin" really stood out to me.
The one thing I was not in love with was the dialogue. Some of it sounded a bit stiff and overly formal; however, I will keep in mind that Storm and Cyclops were the two main characters for this section, and they're both very stiff and formal people.
Post more soon! :)