XTIN: The Dragon's Dreamworld (NSFW)

[JeremyRay]

This page took too long, but the worst part is, it's not all that great either :(

I originally wrote this as one page, but I had to split it into two or three pages, so the page count for issue 2 may be as high as 67 pages. Which means there are six more pages to go, as of this page.

Well anyway now you know who the new people are. All the Queens did the same thing, and sent their clones off to the other Queens knowing what would happen to them. They still couldn't bring themselves to make anyone different from themselves.

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Another page down - I merged a future page into this page, so now we're down to three more pages to go (in this chapter). Next week ends it!

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Dragon with piranha school for head.

[Horned Helm]

Hi there, I just wanted to drop in and let you know that I like what I see. I've just briefly glanced through, but this comic looks amazing. I'm always on the lookout for a new, truly horrific comic. I will be taking the time to read through your archives and coming back to give you a more thorough impression.

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Horned Helm - If you want "truly horrific," you should like this one. I wonder if any other horror story has killed as many people?

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I'm be making a clean up pass over the first volume. If there's anything you can't stand, or think is wrong, now's the time to speak up.

[JeremyRay]

Is the title too Batman? I like the awfulness of having these two ideas together, but if it sounds like a Batman reference, I may get rid of it.

I've been looking at the P.O.D. publishers, and it won't be possible to print XTIN through any of them. They're all staying kid safe. Yuck. Since XTIN wouldn't generate enough pre-orders for a regular print run, I suppose it won't be in print any time soon.

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Remember when I said the new plan was to do two page updates a week, and paint on Fridays? After reading through the first volume, I'm feeling better about line art. It works o.k. I'd rather have more pages and more story than slow down the update frequency trying to do "fine art." So here's a Tuesday update, thanks for the donations ;) I'm trying to do daily updates this week to get caught up on extra pages. I may not be able to get each page done in a day, but I'm shooting for it.

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