Esper Shift: An Animesque Fantasy RPG - Sign-Up Thread!

[kain5252]

Okay then, honest opinion time.


What do people think of my character? I know Sharo gave it a thumbs up, and Ghost says it is okay, but what does everyone else think?

He seems pretty cool. Dont see many wealthy characters

[Ghost]

Okay then, honest opinion time.

What do people think of my character? I know Sharo gave it a thumbs up, and Ghost says it is okay, but what does everyone else think?

I kinda like him. Smart guy, doesn't seem terrible flashy, probably the kind who gets underestimated a lot.

Not to give anything away, but I have a couple of NPC I think he's going to get along well with.

His ability might come across as a bit underwhelming in the long run, but all the clairvoyance-type abilities tend to be highly specialized, so he's not alone in that regard. I could see him evolve into a really good tactitian.

[Cleric of Hell's Brigade]

I kinda like him. Smart guy, doesn't seem terrible flashy, probably the kind who gets underestimated a lot.

Not to give anything away, but I have a couple of NPC I think he's going to get along well with.

His ability might come across as a bit underwhelming in the long run, but all the clairvoyance-type abilities tend to be highly specialized, so he's not alone in that regard. I could see him evolve into a really good tactitian.

That's kind of what I want. I want the NPC's to underestimate him because he doesn't seem to have any real offensive power they can judge.

[FalconX2000]

Yes. And once she gets to a high enough skill level (I would say roughly 6 or 7), she can make the field form-fitting.

What use would that be? It's a telekinetic aura right? The shapes she can mold objects into without breaking them are still limited by their structure, aren't they?

One interesting thing is that you bothered to bring spiritual beliefs into the personality, something I don't think anyone else has done.

Cleric's Edan character is Christian

[FalconX2000]

Okay then, honest opinion time.


What do people think of my character? I know Sharp gave it a thumbs up, and Ghost says it is okay, but what does everyone else think?

Combined with my SHR2 experience, I think he shows that his creator really likes the name Edan.

[Eternal Torment]

What use would that be? It's a telekinetic aura right? The shapes she can mold objects into without breaking them are still limited by their structure, aren't they?

Oh, you'll find out soon enough.

It will not be pretty.

[Yun Lao]

Hmmm....Noburo's maximum power....

*Ponder*

While I could give his ability cool uses with pseudo-scientific explanations, I think the following would work better:


*During a vicious curbstomp battle against the heroes*
Noburo: ...nothing works!....I....I have no choice! "...O....Onee-san!!"


"Who dares mess with my cute, little, adorable brother?!"

Inoue Shinobu
PHYSICAL STATS:
Brawn: ∞!!
Agility: ∞!!
Skill: ∞!!
Perception: ...-3?!

[Legato]

Hmmm....Noburo's maximum power....

*Ponder*

While I could give his ability cool uses with pseudo-scientific explanations, I think the following would work better:


*During a vicious curbstomp battle against the heroes*
Noburo: ...nothing works!....I....I have no choice! "...O....Onee-san!!"


"Who dares mess with my little cute, adorable brother?!"

Inoue Shinobu
PHYSICAL STATS:
Brawn: ∞!!
Agility: ∞!!
Skill: ∞!!
Perception: ...-3?!

Nice pic

Oh what does anyone think of my character that I posted. Thanks to suggestions from Sharp I did made some tweaking to the bio to broaden her a little

[Guy1]

Made a small change to my character so I hope it's cool with Ghost

Name: Alana McFeorias

GENDER: Female

AGE: 17

NATIONALITY: Irish American

WEAPON DISCIPLINE:

Ironshod Quarterstaff





APPEARANCE: Long light black hair and light black colored eyes, around 5'7", 125 pounds



CHARACTER HISTORY & PERSONALITY: Alana comes from a upper class family. Her father is a psychiatrist while her mother is a dance instructor. At the age of five she learned dancing from her mother while learning martial arts from her father. By the age of thirteen she learned to blend in both dancing and martial arts as her own type of fighting style

Alana considers herself to be an average student. She is intelligent but sometimes she does have the tendancy to hold it back. She likes writing and wishes to become a writer one day. While she does believe in the existance of a powerful cosmic being the belief is not enough to choose religion.

Her father and mother are both Catholic but they both believe that their daughter should have the freedom to explore either their religion or other religion should she choose to.

CHARACTER SONG (Optional): Working on it

PERSONAL SKILL: Dancing and writing

PHYSICAL STATS:

Brawn: 1
Agility: 1
Skill: 2
Perception: 1

ESPER ABILITY: Seasonal Elemental Casting

Description: She manipulates the four elements, Water, Fire, Earth, Air. Her casting of the elements depends on the seasons. Her hair and eye color changes to effect the following seasons

Spring: Earth based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes bright green

Summer: Fire based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes auburn red

Winter: Water based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes ocean blue.

Fall: Wind based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes light black

She can only use one element per season and once that has been used she cant use another one till the next season approaches.

Psy Stats:

Power: 3
Skill: 3
Range: 2
Speed: 2

Looking good Legato.

[Radioactive Zombie]

Belated thanks to Sharp. I think it was how I played the character (he was pretty... single-minded when I first drew him up) that made him look flat.

Also, balls.

[Sound Silence]

One interesting thing is that you bothered to bring spiritual beliefs into the personality, something I don't think anyone else has done. It's a good hook for the character, something you can build on during RP. It's not surprising she considers herself an average student - she's spreading herself thin. Schooling, martial arts, dancing, writing.

Huh. That's actually something I'd never considered.

I imagine Mielikki's life seems pretty atheist. I might consider making her a (really weak) Neopagan...hmmm...

It's one of the more depraved acts one can think of.

Yes, the vast majority of my villains are hammy psychos. So what?

I think cannibalism is just kind of pragmatic. If you're on an island and your buddy dies...no shame in munching on his corpse to survive.

[Tami]

Made a small change to my character so I hope it's cool with Ghost

Name: Alana McFeorias

GENDER: Female

AGE: 17

NATIONALITY: Irish American

WEAPON DISCIPLINE:

Ironshod Quarterstaff





APPEARANCE: Long light black hair and light black colored eyes, around 5'7", 125 pounds



CHARACTER HISTORY & PERSONALITY: Alana comes from a upper class family. Her father is a psychiatrist while her mother is a dance instructor. At the age of five she learned dancing from her mother while learning martial arts from her father. By the age of thirteen she learned to blend in both dancing and martial arts as her own type of fighting style

Alana considers herself to be an average student. She is intelligent but sometimes she does have the tendancy to hold it back. She likes writing and wishes to become a writer one day. While she does believe in the existance of a powerful cosmic being the belief is not enough to choose religion.

Her father and mother are both Catholic but they both believe that their daughter should have the freedom to explore either their religion or other religion should she choose to.

CHARACTER SONG (Optional): Working on it

PERSONAL SKILL: Dancing and writing

PHYSICAL STATS:

Brawn: 1
Agility: 1
Skill: 2
Perception: 1

ESPER ABILITY: Seasonal Elemental Casting

Description: She manipulates the four elements, Water, Fire, Earth, Air. Her casting of the elements depends on the seasons. Her hair and eye color changes to effect the following seasons

Spring: Earth based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes bright green

Summer: Fire based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes auburn red

Winter: Water based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes ocean blue.

Fall: Wind based elements. Her hair and eye color becomes light black

She can only use one element per season and once that has been used she cant use another one till the next season approaches.

Psy Stats:

Power: 3
Skill: 3
Range: 2
Speed: 2

Interesting, nice bio. Though her powers seem more like magic than psychic. Basically, she is an elemental-kinetic.

[FalconX2000]

Not to be outdone by the Monkey King, Lord Falcon creates a convenient table summary of the Esper Shift cast:





Total characters: 22

Age 15: 4
Age 16: 3
Age 17: 3
Age 18: 7
Age 19: 5

Male: 13
Female: 9

[Cleric of Hell's Brigade]

Combined with my SHR2 experience, I think he shows that his creator really likes the name Edan.

I do for some reasons.

[Cleric of Hell's Brigade]

Not to be outdone by the Monkey King, Lord Falcon creates a convenient table summary of the Esper Shift cast:





Total characters: 22

Age 15: 4
Age 16: 3
Age 17: 3
Age 18: 7
Age 19: 5

Male: 13
Female: 9

Nice flow chart, Falcon!