I've got to say, I've liked more of what I've been seeing on here than in the CBI contest. If I were an editor, I'd hire some of you. The contestants were very strong this year but some crazy panel layouts got in the way of storytelling. I've been so busy lately, I don't have time for the Play-at-Home. For fun I might tackle a couple of the scripts later for portfolio material.

The one thing I see alot of that's a horrible cliche already is the character breaking out of the panel borders. It may look cool but it should be used sparingly. There is no reason that the horn on Rhino's head should be jutting out of the panels on Reed's piece. What would have worked better is to eliminate the border altogether and let it bleed out. It's a minor crit but there it is. Same goes for Wilson.

I really dig Vig's Amazing Friends. Dan M's and Kamgate's are awesome too. I love the acting going on Dan's second page.