Hi guys here is a script I have been writing for a while called Batman Vengeance it features my newly created Batman villain called The Enforcer. Here is the synopsis and first scene. Tell me what you think about it and whether or not you want to see more of it.
Synopsis Of Batman Vengeance
Set in the middle of The Dark Knightís career as Gothamís savior Batman Vengeance tells the tale of Batman facing a figure from his past. This comes in the form of a new vigilante known only as The Enforcer who uses brutal methods to eliminate the criminals of Gotham City. Meanwhile Batman must also face a new emerged villain in the form of Mr Freeze who blames Batman from preventing him to cure his wife Nora who has a rare disease.
Warner Brothers logo opens up with dramatic music. Switch to a shot on a dark street also the words 10 years ago come up.
A speeding car stops suddenly in front of a small house on the dark street. Out of the car steps out a big man, you donít see his face but you see him pointing at the house. Then out of the car come smartly dressed gangsters with Tommy guns. They approach the front of the house. Then the big man approaches the house and in his hand is a coin. He suddenly flips it and it lands on the side with two scratches.
Two Face: Looks like this is the Batmanís unlucky day. Boys raid the house and bring the girl to me alive.
Suddenly one of the Gangsters turns around to Two Face and speaks. His name is Tony Lector. He is a tall man with jet black hair and big bold features.
Tony Lector: Remind me again Two Face why are we after an insignificant woman?
Two Face: Lets just say she is what makes our dear Dark Knightís heart beat and tonight we shall make his heart stop beating once and for all.
Then after those words Two Face gets out a gun and points it at Tonyís head.
Two Face: Now Tony, I hope you fully understand the situation nowÖ
A scared Tony looks up Two Face, daring not to look at the disfigured side of Two Faceís face.
Tony Lector: Yes Mr Two Face Sir like crystal.
Two Face: Good to hear. Now boys letís bring this place down hard.
Then with those words spoken Two Faceís men smash down the front door of the house and enter the house. Half of the men search the downstairs of the house and the other half search the upstairs. In one of the bedrooms upstairs there is a woman. She is sitting by the window of her room looking at the night sky. She is quite tall with short light brown hair; she is wearing a red jumper with black trousers and has her hair tied up in a knot. Her name is Amanda Seinfeld and she is the current girlfriend of Bruce Wayne AKA Batman.
Then without a glance at the nearest star her door gets smashed down. In come two of Two Faceís men. She stays there gazing at the night sky. The two gangsters come towards her, pointing their Tommy guns at her head. One of the gangsters starts to speak.
Random Gangster: You better be coming with us doll face, itís lucky the boss wants you alive.
Then with those words spoken they grab Amanda by her neck and drag her downstairs. She is screaming all the way down. Meanwhile outside the house, Two Face is waiting and he sees all of his men empty the house. One of the gangsters turns to him.
Random Gangster: Do you want us to torch this place down boss?
Then Two Face gets his coin out of his pocket.
Two Face: Heads say we leave it men and the scratched side says we burn the place down.
Then he flips his coin and it lands heads.
Two Face: Letís leave the place boys, now back to Headquarters. It is only a matter of time before Batman comes looking for her.
Then with those words spoken, Two Face and his thugs get back into the car. They drive of into the dark night with their dark intent.
Meanwhile in another part of the city in an apartment room there is a woman tied up with her mouth stitched up with tape. From the shadows emerges a man. He is a scruffy looking man with nearly shaven hair and he is wearing a ripped t-shirt as well as shorts. The manís name is Mr Zsasz and he is a brutal serial killer.
Mr Zsasz: You are a zombie my dear not a pretty little girl like all the boys tell you. You have no purpose in life and I have taken it upon myself to set you free.
Then he picks up a carving knife from the floor and approaches the tied up girl. He suddenly grabs the tips of her hair.
Mr Zsasz: So soft like spreading soft butter on bread. I think I will make this quick, easy and painless. Let me just say my dear you will certainly not be the first to be set free by yours truly. Infact I have set loads of you zombies free. Would you like to me to show you?
Then the woman tied up lets out a little scream even though her mouth is stitched up by sticky tape.
Mr Zsasz: I would take that as a yes then my dear.
Then with a little chuckle he rips open his shirt. To the girlís horror she sees loads of scars all over Mr Zsasz`s body and arms.
Mr Zsasz: You see I mark the people I set free with these scars. I make these scars with my little friend, which you see here. Now letís see after I set you free you will be victim numberÖ.
He starts muttering numbers to himself and then gives out a loud screech.
Mr Zsasz: Oh fuck I have lost count, although you usually do when you have been at this job for years.
Then he approaches the tied up woman again and removes the tape from her mouth.
Mr Zsasz: Now any last words before I set you free my dear?
Tied Up Girl: You really think you will win Zsasz? No you wonít, soon you be back in Arkham with your little pecker friends.
Mr Zsasz: And who do you think will come and save you huh bitch?
Then he grabs his knife and points the tip of it at her neck.
Mr Zsasz: Now its time...
Suddenly the light in the room goes out and everything is dark. Then a voice is heard from the shadows of the night?
Voice: You have lost your edge Zsasz. I mean those traces you left are the stuff of a sloppy killer. Something I would expect from the Penguin but not you, maybe you should hang up your knife and retire.
Mr Zsasz: You dare mock me Batman I have claimed more people then you have put away; maybe you should hang up your cape and retire.
Batman: That is not going to happen anytime soon. I am taking you in Zsasz.
Then suddenly Zsasz starts running and jumps out of a glass window and runs across some rooftops. Meanwhile inside Batman lights a candle nearby and frees the tied up woman. The woman then turns around and starts talking.
Random Woman: Thanks for saving me Batman by the name my name is Lizzy how about dinner some time.
To her shock she realises the Batman has disappeared into the deep dark cold night to catch Mr Zsasz.
In the dark night of Gotham City a lone figure is running along rooftops of the lower ends of Gotham City. The lone figure is Mr Zsasz, a serial killer of extreme insanity. At present he is being chased by the Batman.
Mr Zsasz: You really think you can catch me Batman??
Mr Zsasz then jumps down a few rooftops and lands in a dark ally. He turns around and realises that Batman is not there.
Mr Zsasz: Hiding are we Batman. Why donít you come here and face me like a man.
It then starts to rain heavily and the sound of thunder starts. Mr Zsasz then starts running further into the ally until he reaches a dead end. He turns around in fear and sees a lone shadow.
Batman: You have lost Zsasz give it up.
Mr Zsasz: Not without a fight my dear caped crusader.
Then Mr Zsasz firmly clutches his carving knife in his hand and takes a stab at Batman. Batman then ducks out of the way and delivers a powerful punch at Zsasz`s face. Zsasz`s lip then starts bleeding.
Mr Zsasz: Is that all you got Dark Knight?
Then as those words are finished Batman grabs Mr Zsasz by the neck and throws him against the brick wall of the dark ally. He then approaches Mr Zsasz and grabs him again.
Batman: Itís over Zsasz.
Then he delivers a massive punch at Mr Zsasz `s stomach and then kicks him. The impact of this knocks Mr Zsasz out. Then from up above a helicopter comes into view, it suddenly turns on its searchlight. The man from the helicopter then starts to talk into a loud speaker.
Man From helicopter: Step away from ZsaszÖ. Batman we will take it from here. He will be back in Arkham before you know it.
Then as those words are spoken Batman gets out his grapple gun. He aims it at the nearest building and jumps to it. There he waits and watches for when Gotham needs his help once again.