LWhitehead's Story Ideas

[LWhitehead]

Hi I would like to do a Pulp era that's 1930's masked team comic but with a twist, these heroes and there city and Villians are thrown from there time period into the 21th century. I want my hard heroes to deal with are time period and problems, see how they ajust or not, I would really like to do this idea with DC comics but so far I can't get on there message board.



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[LWhitehead]

Hi some of you may know about the Italian magazine comic W.I.T.C.H. which was by Jetx here in North America into a cartoon series, but seening up here in Canada I thought to myself that I could write a better magic girl novel series about Five girls but I changed thing around bit. First off there all 13 years of age in the first novel but they all live in Vancouver BC Canada, secondly they are imbued with there magical powers from a mystival race that was killed to purify there tainted to this other world by so called Emperor of the Humans living there, this race is Elvish is looks and behavior and they are called the Elderath or Eldran the girls when reciving there powers from Flutterbe unkown to them have there DNA rewritten as well and they slowly through out the series show some physical traits of this race such as there pointed ears, like in the style of Record of Lodess Wars large pointed and slightly floppy.

My main problem is that Jetx which is owned by Disney might sued me over what novel series saying that I ripped them off, I'm not trying too that's why I would like to contact the Artist and creator behind WITCH is that possable?,



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[LWhitehead]

Hi I looking for help and talent Artists who can draw kids very well to bring my comic series to life, it's about the Canadian branch of Kid spy agency inspired by the KND, the works of Ian Fleming and XIII Belgin comic series.


The six member team based in Vancouver B.C. handle cases for the intire nation of Canada, now this agency itself is the first of it's kind dating back too 1851 Egland, and is currently lead by the Director is pictured on screen as the shadowy outline with single colored eyes of a Victorian girl, at the age of XIII they are decomissoned and have there minds altered.


If any one is interetsed please contact me at luke.whitehead@hotmail.com



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[LWhitehead]

Hi again I still looking for talented and creative people for my Jinniyah comic which would bring it to life, also that could give that WITCH comic a good run for it's money in Europe.


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[LWhitehead]

Swan Knight is the title of my latest comic idea that is inspire by Rex Mundi, it's about Victor last name to worked out later a German Canadian who on vaction in Munich Barvaria is pulled back to 1860's of Barvaria to help find and place Ludwig II on the throne, well that's the plotline for the first five issues of the comic.


I need help from those who are interested and given the fact that I never wrote for a comic before?,



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[LWhitehead]

also if there any Artists or people generaly interested in my comic idea please let me know at luke.whitehead@hotmail.com



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[LWhitehead]

For those still interested this Victorian world of late 1860's has magic and steam punk elements in it, such as the Prussian Armed forces having land Ironclads (tanks), and poison gas as well. Think Castle Flalkenstein RPG meets Victoriana RPG



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[LWhitehead]

Now Victor being from the 21th Century help orginze King Ludwig II secret police during the talk with the Barvaria allies leading up to the Austrian-Prussian War. So Victor ends becoming Ludwig II and his kingdom's troubleshooter,




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[LWhitehead]

Hi I need help forming my alt history comic intitled AVA, it's based on the PC game Interstate 76.




The comic is layed out like a 1970's TV action or mystery TV show, it focus on two characters like in the PC game.


Now the setting of this comic is North America during 1976 the Oil Crisis is still going strong and OPEC is the villian of the series.


AVA is short for Auto Viglante Assoction is the grass root reaction to auto based criminals, and lawless out in the West think of them as an auto club with teeth.


I need help with puting the the world and comic together


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[LWhitehead]

Hi since this is the new year I want to work on my idea for a Silver Age American hero team comic starting 1962.



Set in Centennial City with is located in were DC Comics has placed Gotham City the city it self is what you get when you mass New York, Chicago and Philly together.

Right it's too early for calling for Artists what I need help with is formation of the city's layout history and look and feeling, but the comic will have a Jack Kirby feel and look too it.

If anyone interested please let me know?,


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[Malkivian]

Well, I'm from central Europe but still I'd like to help. Let e know if you want me to..

[LWhitehead]

One more thing I would like to add that the Heroes are the first in this Earth to have Super Powers due to an Alien Chemical being introduced in the Earth's Air from outer space, and this comic idea was inspired by Freedom Force PC games and Image comic series based on the games.


So what I need help with is name of the Superhero team, the first for America like DC's Justice League help with character design and look, also need help with Centennial City's layout and history.


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[LWhitehead]

If you are interested please let me know at luke.whitehead@hotmail.com


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[Froggy]

The Liberty League?

[LWhitehead]

Still need help with Swan Knight comic idea if any is still interested in helping me please let me know,


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[LWhitehead]

Hi I need help with with my Captain Nemo mini series of comics like the Dark Horse's Indy Jones comics, which has inspried me to create my own min series on the pulp adventures of Captain Nemo.


Captain Nemo is a former Candian Navy officer and man who created his own sub with a name from the 20'000 Leagues under the sea, he used that book a blue for his life and plans. It was in WW1 which he sign up as Billy Bones and his nickname was BB, during the Great War he saw things that made him the man called Nemo, Captain Nemo hates Imperial nations, War, he loves the sea, his personal freedom.


the first series takes place in 1935 so I need help with Pulpish setting of this world, and the design of the sub which is 888ft long and 60ft from beam. and the crew as well,

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[LWhitehead]

Hi I need help with my idea for an alt history comic series intitled Amerika, it's take place in modern day USA and the USSR and there client states invade and occupaied the states.


In this world the USSR came out stronger at the end of WW2, and also in this world Canada has a real army and navy.


I need help with the setting, the main chaarcter is a German Canadian trapped in New York during the attack and later joins up with the American rebels,


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[mattbib]

I'd first suggest avoiding any comparisons to the television mini-series of the same name.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amerika_%28TV_miniseries%29

[LWhitehead]

Well that mini series is long dead, hence why I used Amerika as a comic title.


But this setting is more Red Dawn like, in this world Canada is lot stronger the Arrow was built and used by Canadian Airforce, the Canadian Royal navy is based on the English one.

Also in this world at the end of WW2 USSR came out stronger then the USA,


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[Tahko Tetsujin]

Well that mini series is long dead, hence why I used Amerika as a comic title.


But this setting is more Red Dawn like, in this world Canada is lot stronger the Arrow was built and used by Canadian Airforce, the Canadian Royal navy is based on the English one.

Also in this world at the end of WW2 USSR came out stronger then the USA,


LW

Canada? Wow this is fiction.

I personally would recommend that you remove the US's involvement in WW2 altogether. To do that you can do what the Axis should have done which was a blitzkrieg attack from Japan, Italy, and Germany all at once instead of having Pearl Harbor.

The terrain would still make it almost impossible to take Russia and Axis supply could be cut off and Russia would successfully be able to defend still against a three pronged attack. This alone would give more hope to all of Europe and Russia can not only defend but start pushing back the Axis by cutting off their supplies and then flanking the crap out of the troops that are left starving.

Europe could have for real totally won if Russia was interested in more than just defending themselves for the most part.

So, no US involvement means a weaker US and a stronger Russia. Well, US could still be a striving country but they wouldn't have any clout in world affairs as they would be the only country that didn't participate in a WORLD WAR.

Pretty much making US into France as far as world view from WWII.

I could go on more but I think I've said enough.

Although, I'm not honestly sure at that point that there would be a Cold War if it had went down like that. It probably would have come down to Russia and China.

[LWhitehead]

Well in the PS2 game Freedom Fighters USSR was the first to develop the A Bomb and used it on Berlin, hence one of the reasons why the Warsaw Pact was alot stronger.


you see in my setting in 1989 Germany was one nation but under East German rule, as for Canada well in movioes like Red Daen and rpgs like Price of Freedom they toldly don't take in count Canada. what I want is a Canada who has a standing Army,Navy and Airforce.


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[LWhitehead]

Hi I need help with my Amerika Rodina setting, it's a alt history comic series which I hope to create. It's inspired by Red Dawn, World in Conlict and PS2 game Freedom Fighters.


The setting is 21th century USA one were the USSR and there allies are still around and more united, also D Day failed and Canada is lot stronger as well.


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[suttercain]

You asked for feedback and two people replied. You then gave reasons why you were not accepting their critiques or suggestions.

Play it safe and don't let others voice their opinion unless you really want to hear it.

[mattbib]

And you really haven't really said what it is you need help with...you've already established your setting.

[LWhitehead]

Well first off I need help fleshing out this world and setting, like so far I figured out to get a stronger USSR operation Overlord had to fail in WW2.


I also need some help with some general info about Red Army and USSR weapons,


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[suttercain]

I also need some help with some general info about Red Army and USSR weapons,


There is an urban legend I once heard... about a site called google or yahoo or something along those lines, sorry don't remember exactly, that allows you to enter things called keywords. Once entered these keywords are sent to a parallel universe where the appropriate data is collected and then sent back to our universe along with information pertaining to those keywords. Never tried it myself for I fear things involving parallel universes and such.

[LWhitehead]

Waht I also need help with is what Europe would look like if operation Overlord failed but the Allies still won,


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[LWhitehead]

Totenkopf my idea for a Western comic is inspires by Jonah Hex's first and current series, mine character is a German American Union solider and officer who during the last days of the spent it in bed due to explosion of a reb cannon, you see back then if anything happened to one's face they didn't have plasic surgeons like they do now his face got burned and melted into a Death's head hence the new name of Totenkopf some while laying in bed he faked his own death due to the simple fact his new face cause the gentle folks to throw up and men gasp in horror.


Five years since the end of the war Totenkopf is a Man Killer and Bounty Hunter, and the most feared Gun slinger.


I need help with the setting and comic structre,

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[LWhitehead]

Hi again I looking for a publisher and help to bring my idea to life, it's a comic inspired by Blood Bowl and Mutant League cartoon series and games.


It's take place in future of America were Bloodsport version of major sports like Football keep the masses happy and bloodlust under control, seening these Mutant modify players bashing there bodies over a ball that become a lethal during a mid point of the game.

For example in the Football game the field has hidden traps and mines on it, no to mention that each member of the teams are trying to main there oposing player.

The other problem is that whole system is riddled with crime, corruption and drug use It's one of the reasons why the players are so hated off the field and live in Gettos in the major cites were there teams are based.

The main character of the comic is a the new owner of the last place team, due to the simple fact that they play clean and honest and the fact that he is a Human who have never played sports before.

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[adam_strong]

hey LWhitehead, you should come up with a story idea based on a group of scientists who figure out how to clone dinosaurs based off of fossil DNA, so they have this giant island with dinosaurs on it, but they all break loose, and of course, craziness ensues.

you could call it "billy and the clone-a-saurus".

see if somebody could help you flesh out this idea.

I have another one for ya, a group of mutants who all live in a mansion under the guidance of a wheelchair bound professor with craaaaazy mind powers. This professors name is Zander. You can call your group of mutants the.... you guessed it Z-MEN!