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TSchloendorn
08-03-2005, 07:42 PM
I did this as a test page after WWPhilly,and I'm finally able to show it.
The name of the book was Zoom Suit,and it was penciled by Billy Dallas Patton.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/Tschloendorn/Inks/BDPtestpage.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/Tschloendorn/Page09.jpg

For a better view of the inks http://www.deviantart.com/view/21240736/
derrickfish
02-06-2006, 08:22 AM
Not bat at'all! I like the use of splatter on the trashy parts for texture. The only thing that really jumped out at me that I would mention would be the light burst of the background character in panel 3. The radiant lines on the ground are out of perspective with the ground, and don't follow what was penciled.

Otherwise, good work.
Mike Wieringo
02-07-2006, 04:25 AM
Lookin' good....!
TSchloendorn
02-21-2006, 12:02 PM
Man I completely forgot that I posted these here.

Derrick I see what you mean.It's one of those little things I need to keep up on.

Mike what can I say,but thank you.It's always nice to have a pro say something nice about your work.

Hopefully I'll have some more stuff to post soon.