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[Super Hero Guy]

So, I found these notes saved on my computer which I wrote a couple of years ago. It's just some random explaining thaeuniverse for a story I never got around writing, and the backstories of a couple of characters I never intended to devolop. I was wondering if anyone found this in anyway interesting, and if I should considering writing the story. Though really, reading this doesn't really give you much idea what the story is actually about. Please respond.

[Michael P]

Two things:

First, I would rename "The Dark Zone" into something more pseudoclassical, along the lines of Heaven and Hell. Limbo is always a popular option, but anything lifed from Dante will suffice.

Second, for the love of God, rename "Freakyland." If this is a real world setting, and you're making up a fake country like Latveria, then give it a real-sounding name.

[Super Hero Guy]

Well, actually, it's pronounced Freh-Kay-Ee with Land pronounced kind of like Lund like so many real countries. In their language it doesn't mean the same thing as English. It's kinda of a joke in the series, which is called, "The Freaky Fighters". It's sort of a neo-gothic fairy tale that plays out kind of like an anime/manga.