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Cimmerian
03-27-2005, 12:33 PM
Page 1 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/14222569/)
Pages 2&3 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/14223112/)
Page 4 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/14223210/)
Page 5 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/14223306/)
Page 6 (http://www.deviantart.com/view/14223390/)

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Knightmare
03-27-2005, 02:51 PM
Those came out pretty good- not sure I like the progression from page 1 to 2-3- but the pencils are good and clean. And the shadowed rendering was very right for comic books. I think you could rework the solo panel of Jean shouting on page 4?-- seems a bit off. The last panel though with the claws in Mojo's face-- good stuff.