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Michael P
03-12-2005, 02:10 PM
Hey, gang. I have a draft of a short story that needs some work, but I'm not sure exactly how to go about doing it. So, I'd like some volunteers to read it over and tell me what they think. Reply here or PM me.
Karl J. Barnes
03-12-2005, 02:23 PM
Hey, gang. I have a draft of a short story that needs some work, but I'm not sure exactly how to go about doing it. So, I'd like some volunteers to read it over and tell me what they think. Reply here or PM me.

Sure, I'll give it a read. I might not get to it real soon, but I'll have read before the week is over and give you my impressions.
Karl J. Barnes
03-15-2005, 02:12 PM
Michael, I just sent my reply to your story. I hope that it helps in some way. It was a very good story. Thanks for letting me read it.