Page Breakdowns

[shawn_381]

Started working on a graphic novel. Page 1 is below - posted the roughs then the initial pencil breakdown. Any insights to composition, please sound off. I'm going back in to tighten the pencils and then ink, if anything bothers anybody too much, I'll try to fix it.

Roughs:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t166/shawn381/BLRPG1Rough.jpg

Breakdown:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t166/shawn381/BLRPG1pencil.jpg

[Eric Henson]

Interesting. It looks pretty fun. I like to see the journey from the loose sketch to the tightened up images. Keep them coming!

What is this western graphic novel about (if I might ask)?

[shawn_381]

Hi Eric,
Me too - I always like seeing other artist's moves from loose to tight...the process is very interesting.

The story is written by another guy I met on here, so I feel kinda funny about saying what it's about without his permission. We're working together along with a couple other guys for inks/color/lettering.

I will try to post some more pages as they get done - not enough to give away the story, but enough to spark interest?

Basically, a classic Western/revenge story. Gotta love it.

[Eric Henson]

\Basically, a classic Western/revenge story. Gotta love it.
Nice! I look forward to seeing the completion of this project.