Anonnymouse
06-29-2009, 05:51 PM
Hello,
I'm writing an ongoing comic series called Carrion, in which a city with a corrupt mayor (originality!) is facing a political assassin as two detectives desperately try to uncover the truth. Their trump-card, however, is a corrupt police officer named Ray. Ray informs them that he has been taking bribes to push the investigations surrounding the political murders away from the mayor and his activities. This infers that the killer is on the mayor's payroll, further supported by the fact that all of the murders have been targeting the mayor's opponents.
And that's the summary for this issue.
Take a read of the script (it's rather long), and tell me what you think if you feel so inclined. Thank you for your time!
Script: http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1576453
I'm writing an ongoing comic series called Carrion, in which a city with a corrupt mayor (originality!) is facing a political assassin as two detectives desperately try to uncover the truth. Their trump-card, however, is a corrupt police officer named Ray. Ray informs them that he has been taking bribes to push the investigations surrounding the political murders away from the mayor and his activities. This infers that the killer is on the mayor's payroll, further supported by the fact that all of the murders have been targeting the mayor's opponents.
And that's the summary for this issue.
Take a read of the script (it's rather long), and tell me what you think if you feel so inclined. Thank you for your time!
Script: http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1576453