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maniacthw
01-30-2009, 02:33 AM
Yes, there is a reason The Biker doesn't talk or have a name yet. I want to throw a twist into this story and give not necessarily a new type of hero, but a not very often used type. Anyways, here it is.


[And there he stood, face to face with a 5’4 body in a zipped up black leather jacket, black leather pants, black boots and a black bikers helmet with the visor down. He stood in his ski mask with the eye holes cut out, his beige shirt under a green vest, and blue jeans, still grasping the bag of money in his hands. He reaches into his vest and pulls out a revolver and shoots at the masked biker. The bullets reflect off the leather and the biker walks towards him. He empties his gun trying to kill the masked hero. He, visually frightened, turns and runs but trips over a curb on the dark lit alley. The biker approaches as the man tries crawling away.]

Thief: “Who are you!?”

[The masked vigilante just stares him down. It reaches down , grabs his legs, picks him up over it’s head, and slams him back down with no effort once so ever, The red and blue lights can be seen in the distance as the man lay motionless on the alley street. Our hero quickly backflips against the wall of the brick building next to them and climbs to the roof while observing the arrest.]

maniacthw
01-30-2009, 03:29 AM
Since I'm assuming this is the standard for posting these, here it is...


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9 panel layout.

Top panel, left:

[The panel depicts a somewhat chubby man wearing a black ski mask with a white shirt under a green vest, blue jeans, and a pair of black running shoes pointing a gun at a store clerk behind a cash register wearing a red button down uniform shirt.]

Man: “Give me the money!”

Top panel, middle:

[The clerk is seen reaching into the register with a handful of money in one hand and a bag in another. The thief, looking worried, aims the gun at the clerk.]

Man: “I said HURRY!”

Top panel, right:

[The man reaches over the counter, grabs the bag, with money spilling out of the top, and turns to run.]

Middle panel, left:

[The man is seen running down a back alley looking behind him when he runs into someone dressed in a black biker helmet with the visor down, a thick, black leather jacket zipped up, and a thick pair of black leather pants and a pair of black, steel toed, boots.]

Middle panel, middle:

[The man falls to the asphalt as the person in leather walks towards him. He had his gun ready in his hand.]

Man: Who are you?

Middle panel, right:

[The biker just stares blankly at the man.]

Bottom panel, left:

[The man looks up and starts shooting at the biker and the bullets repel off the leather.]

Man: “I suppose you’re supposed to be a hero, huh?”

Bottom panel, middle:

[The biker has the man lifted over their head effortlessly.]

Bottom panel, right:

[The biker slams the man onto the road]

3 horizontal panel layout

Top panel

[The biker looks up and sees the red and blue lights approaching around the corner.]

Middle panel

[The biker backflips onto the tall brick wall of the store that was just robbed and climbs the rest of the way up as the police round the corner.]

Bottom panel

[The biker watches down below as the police arrest the criminal, who is now unmasked showing a white male with brown hair and green eyes. He looks up and acknowledges the biker]

Man: “This isn’t over! I’m going to get out, and then I’m going to kill you!”