X-俳句!!! (X-Haiku)

[x_goalkeeper]

Please forgive if there is a thread like this already, I don't have a good relationship with the search function here :mad:

Anyway I think Haiku is known around the world as 17 syllable poetry with 3 lines (5, then 7, then 5 syllables). Easy to write even in different languages if you want!

I would like to keep it positive as much as possible, this may be a good outlet for positive creativity for the X-Men and maybe even for your favorite stories or arcs (Messiah Complex, Kingbreaker, Torn, etc). If no one goes first I'll start it!

[x_goalkeeper]

Began psychic affair
Kept secret, all found out soon
Love started after

[x_goalkeeper]

Kept by Professor
Beat X-Men then helped them
But may strike again

[Excelsior]

Emma destroys Scott
The X-men reform New Team
The New X.S.E.

[Excelsior]

Wolverine's hairy
People think he is Bigfoot
Jean buys him some Nair

[Novaya Havoc]

Rachel Grey's a skank
I never ever liked her
I hope she dies soon

[justinkos91]

Madrox of X-Factor,
Slept with Siryn, knocked her up,
What does Deadpool think...

[Novaya Havoc]

eat yo rice tessa
you need a hardware upgrade
gtfo now

[justinkos91]

Domino has luck
X-23 cuts, Rahne howls
Wolverine leads them

[Excelsior]

CC had a dream
For some it is a nightmare
X-men Arena

[justinkos91]

Callisto's eyepatch
How did she get it? A fight?
Don't declare knife fights!

[seeso]

X babes aplenty
Every color and size
Wish they were real

[Excelsior]

IF Yost would write Storm
An Ongoing series
I would cry joy tears

:biggrin:

[Novaya Havoc]

IF Yost would write Storm
An Ongoing series
I would cry joy tears

:biggrin:

A-HEM!

An. On. Go. Ing. Ser. Ies.

THAT IS SIX SYLLABLES, NOT THE REQUIRED SEVEN.

Fail.

[The Black Guardian]

History repeats
Mankinds inhumanity
Our Lord M was right!

[worstblogever]

He sees you. Peepers.
In Predator X's Belly.
Dead, but still he sees.

[Kid Icarus]

He sees you. Peepers.
In Predator X's Belly.
Dead, but still he sees.

why isnt this a Manifest Destiny story?

[worstblogever]

why isnt this a Manifest Destiny story?

It's too epic for a 8 page story. It needs its own maxi-series.



Peepers. He died for your voyeuristic sins.

[The Black Guardian]

Of firebird born
And misery shaped to live
Mother's legacy

Blah blah blah, and blah
It's another Dazzler song
Figures it would suck

[x_goalkeeper]

Kitty saved Peter
Short but meaningful time spent
He can't save Kitty

[Novaya Havoc]

He sees you. Peepers.
In Predator X's Belly.
Dead, but still he sees.

A-HEM!

In. Pre. Da. Tor. Eks. es. Bel. Ly.

THAT IS EIGHT SYLLABLES, NOT THE REQUIRED SEVEN.

Fail.

I expected better from you, WBE!

[Novaya Havoc]

Dazzling Glitter Babe
She shines bright like the north star
BOW BEFORE HER NOW

[Vanish]

Too many hands you greedy
Where you put W. Dance?
Girl you been cancelled

[x_goalkeeper]

Too many hands you greedy
Where you put W. Dance?
Girl you been cancelled

This is very interesting!, but who or what is the subject?

[x_goalkeeper]

Caught Scott and Emma
Tore through Emma's mind and heart
But Ems won in end

[Excelsior]

Kitty Pryde Bullet
Josh Whedon's final revenge
Buffy should join her

[marvell2100]

X-men have a dream
Lord of all is what it seems
Death will have us all

[marvell2100]

Save us if you can
Cannot find a better man
The world will endure

[Josef F.]

Magic Space Guns Call ;
First Lady of the X Men
Girl, Dump your Boyfriend.

[marvell2100]

Magneto I am
Saving mutants if I can
Legacy unclear

[Yogaflame]

Ororo dances;
naked in the open sky.
Beautiful goddess.

Organic steel skin
shining bright in the sunshine.
Gentle power there.

Devastated kid,
Magnetic prowess grown up,
Savior of his kind?

Psi blast butterfly
Ninja purple hair bombshell
Psylocke, I miss you.

Demon from afar,
Swashbuckler in his own heart,
Hero: Nightcrawler.

Nuclear eyeballs,
Ruby visor covers all
Hidden pain within.

[Seres]

Why did Darkstar die?
She was my favourite, Grant!
...Curse you, Morrison

[marvell2100]

Who am I to be?
Man, monster or Wolverine?
Let me tell you, Snikt!

[x_goalkeeper]

Ororo dances;
naked in the open sky.
Beautiful goddess.

Organic steel skin
shining bright in the sunshine.
Gentle power there.

Devastated kid,
Magnetic prowess grown up,
Savior of his kind?

Psi blast butterfly
Ninja purple hair bombshell
Psylocke, I miss you.

Demon from afar,
Swashbuckler in his own heart,
Hero: Nightcrawler.

Nuclear eyeballs,
Ruby visor covers all
Hidden pain within.

Wow those are some really nice ones! :eek:

Who am I to be?
Man, monster or Wolverine?
Let me tell you, Snikt!

And this one is clever! :cool:

[x_goalkeeper]

Many battles worldwide
All for baby: live or die
Outcome in question?

[Yogaflame]

Wow those are some really nice ones! :eek:



And this one is clever! :cool:

Many thanks, and thank you also for creating this thread. It has reminded me how cool haikus(and poetry in general) are. Go Japanese artistry! :biggrin:

[marvell2100]

Fight! Only the best
Survival of the fittest
Apocalypse now

[marvell2100]

My minds' eye can see
Our thoughts are one, can it be?
You are like me. Mutant

[psychic_therapy]

Leader of the team!
Calm, brave, leads by example
Cyclops gets 'er done!

[Savant]

Poor man's Kitty Pryde
I find you irritating
Please take a dirt nap.

[Seres]

Poor man's Kitty Pryde
I find you irritating
Please take a dirt nap.

Kitty Pryde is good
But uncomparable in
Terms of character.

You should call Pixie
A poor man's Jubilee or
Maybe Wind Dancer

In terms of how the
Character is portrayed in
The X-Men comics.

But yet I think that
Pixie is really brilliant*.
Because she is Welsh.

Welsh Solidarity!

*Two syllables long when spoken with a Yorkshire accent.

[justinkos91]

Dreaming a Demon Bear
Feathers in her braided hair
Tradition Moonstar

[The Black Guardian]

Dreaming a Demon Bear
Feathers in her braided hair
Tradition Moonstar
Nice, but your first line has 6 syllables.

[justinkos91]

Nice, but your first line has 6 syllables.

DANG!

Aim of the Longshot
Domino falls right in place
who's luck will run out?

[x_goalkeeper]

Young mutants in school
Learn in class and in real life
The future X-Men

[marvell2100]

Spread my wings to fly
Angel into Archangel
Beautiful wings gone

[Jack Flash]

Vincente is solid
or just maybe a gas cloud
Vincente is liquid

[psychic_therapy]

Is the Iceman gay?
Dating girls while hiding truth?
Gay? What do you say?

[justinkos91]

Diamonds forever
Emma Grace Frost, the teacher
Lover of Cyclops

[The Thunderbird]

He is immortal
He can heal from a lone cell
He is Wolverine

He is everywhere
When his movie is released
No comic is safe

:biggrin: :biggrin: :biggrin: :biggrin:

[Vanish]

YO YO don't u kno
Cipher got this thang on lock
Get off her jet, HO.

[x_goalkeeper]

Diamonds forever
Emma Grace Frost, the teacher
Lover of Cyclops

I love this, beautiful! :cool:

[x_goalkeeper]

He is immortal
He can heal from a lone cell
He is Wolverine

He is everywhere
When his movie is released
No comic is safe


This is funny!!! :biggrin:

[x_goalkeeper]

Ghost Boxes Story
Great but what message to tell?
Interesting though!