Lexington
09-12-2008, 03:41 PM
I know there are several drawing threads in this but It said writing aswell so I decided to show my early idea's I had for an alternative DCU mutch like the Ultimate marvel but more than just a moderniseation of it but mixing of charicters and twisting them into ways they arn't expected to be changed into.
Open with picture of meteor shower over metropolis then show a limo just out of town sort of thing with a man steeping out to find a young child then taking said child like the kents did. The person is unseen but the licence plate is a custom one with Luther written on it. The cut to a Gotham like city and a batman like figures silhouette looking over the city, he then jumps of ledge and falls opening his cape just before hitting the ground and lands on a van. Action built which ends with a riddler kicking the batman like character off but the figure fly’s back onto the van and knocks the riddler out.
Now it’s a Vietnam War flashback scene with Slade fighting but dives in front of another solider but gets shoot in the eye, while he starts to fade away he looks up and see’s bright green light. Then suddenly he’s waking from the dream twenty years afterwards and he’s a homeless drifter who keeps complaining about voices in his head.
Next page is green arrow in a forensics lab trying to save a scientist he beats the kidnapper but him and scientist are both struck by lightning which cuts to a blurred image of both characters running while grabbing there heads in pain.
Open with picture of meteor shower over metropolis then show a limo just out of town sort of thing with a man steeping out to find a young child then taking said child like the kents did. The person is unseen but the licence plate is a custom one with Luther written on it. The cut to a Gotham like city and a batman like figures silhouette looking over the city, he then jumps of ledge and falls opening his cape just before hitting the ground and lands on a van. Action built which ends with a riddler kicking the batman like character off but the figure fly’s back onto the van and knocks the riddler out.
Now it’s a Vietnam War flashback scene with Slade fighting but dives in front of another solider but gets shoot in the eye, while he starts to fade away he looks up and see’s bright green light. Then suddenly he’s waking from the dream twenty years afterwards and he’s a homeless drifter who keeps complaining about voices in his head.
Next page is green arrow in a forensics lab trying to save a scientist he beats the kidnapper but him and scientist are both struck by lightning which cuts to a blurred image of both characters running while grabbing there heads in pain.