babb's Artwork

[babb]

hello this is my first post here lemme know what you think C&C please!

http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr15/babbster777/SWScan00004.jpg
Wolverine vs spidey

http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr15/babbster777/SWScan00003.jpg
just some sketches

And if everyone likes more to come I guess!

[Mermaid]

Welcome!

You got talent there. I like Spidey and Cyclops the best out of those sketches.
Wolvie doesn't look right, something about his body shape is wrong.

They're good though.

[The Adventurer]

Love the Wolverine, though his claws seem a tad short. Probably the perspective, but more likely the perspective and lineweight together.

Spidey seems a bit twisted to me with odd muscle definition, but you've got an A'Okay style in my book, just needs to refinement with practice I'd say.

[mattbib]

Like the style. I agree with TA's comments on your Spider-Man. The muscles wouldn't be so jarring if they weren't so angular. I really like the Cyclops bust, even though I don't like that visor.

[babb]

mermaid: thanks! yeah cyclops is my favourite sketch as well, I see what you mean about wolverine.

Adventurer: thanks, spidey always looked weird to me, I need to practice on him, his dynamic anatomy can be tough to draw.

mattbib: thanks, Its great to here that I have a cool style, and although I love cyclops, the visor does seem a little flat.

[babb]

Hello! This is a page from a web comic I might be doing, just would like some feedback from all the great people here, pencils you see are not done, just the inks and greyscales, and the lettering stinks which will be edited out let me know! all your help is appreciated!

http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr15/babbster777/SWScan00009.jpg

[babb]

C&C welcome thanks for looking, the pic speaks for itself!
http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr15/babbster777/SWScan00013.jpg