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NGK2008
08-05-2008, 08:31 AM
All,

First-time poster here, good to meet you all. I just finished the first issue of a comic I've been putting together in-between work hours. It's called "Homunculus," and it focuses on the somewhat twisted father-son dynamic of Dystopiaro, the world's most infamous super-villain, and Harrier, his sidekick son. When Harrier goes too far in fighting the Justorians, America's premiere super-hero team, Dystopiaro takes drastic action--and the line between heroes and villains blurs...

Please check it out, I really think that it's more substantive than usual webcomic fare about ninja vampires or whatever: http://www.drunkduck.com/Homunculus/index.php?p=439389

(After clicking the above link, use the big arrow at the bottom to go to the next page; the smaller, double arrow takes you to the end--but don't click it, you'll spoil the surprise!)

Eager to hear your thoughts--I'm mostly concerned with the writing, as I had to illustrate the comic because I wasn't able to find anyone to collaborate with (I can draw pretty well, but just don't think I'll ever have the discipline to do it professionally).

Anywho, thanks!

Best,

Niko Karvounis

armandoB
08-05-2008, 11:28 AM
good stuff

NGK2008
08-05-2008, 12:04 PM
hey armando, thanks! And same to you about Cataclysm...I really love your use of shadows and blue highlights--very compelling.

N

Rik Levins
08-05-2008, 04:38 PM
I liked it.

Well written, artwork's quite good, and the surprise ending worked well.

Let's see more.

beatlesfan778
08-05-2008, 05:02 PM
Pretty good, keep up the good work!

NGK2008
08-05-2008, 10:28 PM
Rik and Beatlesfan, thanks so much for the kind words! And more's on the way, slowly but surely...

(And Rik, the compliment especially means a lot coming from you--thanks for taking the time to check out the comic!)

N