Crisis on Infinite Marvel Earths

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The complete and updated text of the July spanning epic (from the Rumbles Board) located here:

http://www.geocities.com/garrison40/Crisis_on_Infinite_Marvels.pdf

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If the PDF file is too big, here it is on my old GeoSpace link

http://www.geocities.com/garrison40/crisis.html

Art to come soon.

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The art begins:

Cytorakk enhanced Spiderman =
Scarlet Spider

http://www.geocities.com/garrison40/scarlet_spidey.jpg

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Stages - The Anti-Monitor

http://www.geocities.com/garrison40/antimonitor_stages.jpg

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Destroyer of Worlds

http://www.geocities.com/garrison40/destroyer_of_worlds.jpg

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More art from my Fan Fiction.

http://fc40.deviantart.com/fs33/i/2008/291/5/b/Legion_of_Doom_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

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I have to admit, it was a good idea but poor follow through.

http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs33/f/2008/290/3/a/Crisis_Infinite_Marvels_cover1_by_PatchMadripoor.j pg

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http://fc98.deviantart.com/fs33/f/2008/289/0/8/Galactus_vs__Anti_Monitor_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

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http://fc24.deviantart.com/fs35/f/2008/291/e/1/Impossible_Man___CoIM_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

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http://fc22.deviantart.com/fs34/i/2008/292/7/b/Skull_Squadron_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

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Before the big reveal of my fan fiction page.

http://fc92.deviantart.com/fs35/f/2008/295/4/4/Chapter_41_2nd_to_last_page_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

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http://fc66.deviantart.com/fs34/i/2008/298/9/4/Spiderman_vs__Firelord__Rnd2_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

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http://fc63.deviantart.com/fs33/i/2008/301/9/6/End_of_Chapter_31_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

[Joe Acro]

Hey, Patch. I've been following this thread since you started it, largely because I'm intrigued by the notion. That, and the promotional art is neat.

Now that I'm seeing actual story, though, I think you need to take more care in editing. I see a number of mistakes in the dialogue and text (most glaringly, when to use "you're" vs. "your"). Also, you have Fury essentially spell out Spidey's mission before he gives him the mission, so the whole briefing seems a bit disjointed.

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I know. I was writing this on the fly during work during the quiet moments while I awaited reports to process, so there are some continuity errors, spelling errors and other gaffs. Even re-reading it now I see moments where I just faceplant myself hard.

I do hope you enjoy the story, despite the flaws.

p.s. the entries at deviantart flow a little bit better, with less flaws...

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http://fc48.deviantart.com/fs34/f/2008/299/0/d/Anti_Monitor_Ascendant_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg

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Art for the fight between the Great Tree of All Worlds and it's defender and the threat from beyond....

http://fc23.deviantart.com/fs33/i/2008/300/4/7/Anti_Monitor_vs__Yggdrasil_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg


I wanted more vines and tendrils attacking, but it just became too much, so I settled with something simple.

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http://fc39.deviantart.com/fs38/f/2008/317/0/c/Franklin_Richards_vs__Anti_Mon_by_PatchMadripoor.j pg

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http://fc89.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/348/1/9/At_War_with_the_Infinite_by_PatchMadripoor.jpg