ZombieKilla
04-17-2008, 07:56 AM
This is a shorty in a series of shorts that I'm writing for my artist (Brad Pascual - Rombie's Artist) to practice sequentials and for fun at the same time. Established characters in whatever scenario we want them in. The objective was to keep it short and sweet but action filled. So keep your eye out for the finished work soon enough, until then all C&C is welcome :smile: This is a second draft of this script and I'm not that happy with the 6 panels on each page, I'm thinking of extending it to 4 pages to give a little more room on each page.
PAGE ONE
(6 Panels)
Panel 1. RED SKULL is shouting and holding a radiating COSMIC CUBE over his head.
RED SKULL:
Finally! My army will march again!!
Panel 2. A skeleton/zombie arm is shooting from the ground. The ZOMBIE’S arm has a jacket on with Nazi buttons.
Panel 3. Similar to panel one but this time there is a brooding Nazi Undead Army standing around the base of the hill RED SKULL is atop.
RED SKULL:
Go forth to destruction!
SFX (RANDOM ZOMBIENESS):
Urgh, Ugghhh, Arrrhhh, etc…
CAP (OP COMING FROM THE BOTTOM OF THE PANEL):
Not with me in the way!
Panel 4. Solo full body shot of CAP in all his ass kicking glory.
CAP:
This crazy tirade ends here!
Panel 5. Strip panel of RED SKULL screaming and pointing towards CAP.
RED SKULL:
GET HIM!!!!
Panel 6. The NAZI HORDE is running towards CAP/reader.
SFX (ZOMBIENESS):
Ugrrhh, Aahhh, Argghhh
PAGE TWO
(6 Panels)
Panel 1. CAP is rushing towards the reader/ZOMBIE HORDE tucked in behind his shield like a human bullet charging in.
Panel 2. Bird’s eye view of CAP carving a path through the ZOMBIE HORDE, zombies are flying through the air to the left and right in his wake.
SFX (ZOMBIENESS):
Argh, AHHH Ugghhh
SFX (CAP CHARGING THROUGH):
THOOOOOOMMM
Panel 3. A ZOMBIE is rushing up behind CAP, who has finally come to a stop.
ZOMBIE:
Ewhhhhh
Panel 4. Action panel of CAP reacting, his shield is slicing through the head of the ZOMBIE down through its body, splitting it along the way.
SFX:
Swooosshh
Panel 5. CAP is still in his follow through position from cutting the ZOMBIE in half from panel 4, but he is looking to the right of the panel where there is a line of ZOMBIES coming at him.
Panel 6. CAP is throwing his shield to the RIGHT of the panel towards the line of ZOMBIES.
SFX:
Thwhoooshhh
PAGE THREE
(6 Panels)
Panel 1. Side shot silhouette panel of CAP’S shield slicing all of the lined up ZOMBIE’S heads off.
SFX (SHIELD):
Whoooosshhh
SFX (MULTIPLE HEADS BEING LOPPED OFF):
Thunk, Thwip, Shwip, Ugghhh, Ahhh
Panel 2. A shield-less CAP is punching/crushing a ZOMBIE’S head, causing enough cranial damage to put it down.
SFX:
KRAK
Panel 3. A particularly huge nasty looking ZOMBIE is coming at CAP/reader, you can see CAP’S shield returning to him in the background.
ZOMBIE:
RAAAHHHH!!!!
Panel 4. CAP’S shield is cutting through the back of the ZOMBIE and coming through the front of him.
ZOMBIE:
RAAARGGGHHH
SFX (SHIELD)
Kwhooosh
Panel 5. View from the eyes of the ZOMBIE on the ground. CAP is standing over him looking down, he has his shield raised over his head as if he is getting ready to slam it down on the ZOMBIE’S head.
CAP:
AHHHHHHH
Panel 6. Smaller panel of CAP’S shield crushing the ZOMBIE head. Illustrate this as graphic or artsy as you’d like.
SFX (SKULL CRUSHING):
QRRSSHHHHH
Panel 7. CAP is standing with the front of his shield showing, the shield has ZOMBIE skull leftovers on it. There are ZOMBIE’S piled around his feet.
CAP:
You’re next Skull!
Thanks for reading!!!
PAGE ONE
(6 Panels)
Panel 1. RED SKULL is shouting and holding a radiating COSMIC CUBE over his head.
RED SKULL:
Finally! My army will march again!!
Panel 2. A skeleton/zombie arm is shooting from the ground. The ZOMBIE’S arm has a jacket on with Nazi buttons.
Panel 3. Similar to panel one but this time there is a brooding Nazi Undead Army standing around the base of the hill RED SKULL is atop.
RED SKULL:
Go forth to destruction!
SFX (RANDOM ZOMBIENESS):
Urgh, Ugghhh, Arrrhhh, etc…
CAP (OP COMING FROM THE BOTTOM OF THE PANEL):
Not with me in the way!
Panel 4. Solo full body shot of CAP in all his ass kicking glory.
CAP:
This crazy tirade ends here!
Panel 5. Strip panel of RED SKULL screaming and pointing towards CAP.
RED SKULL:
GET HIM!!!!
Panel 6. The NAZI HORDE is running towards CAP/reader.
SFX (ZOMBIENESS):
Ugrrhh, Aahhh, Argghhh
PAGE TWO
(6 Panels)
Panel 1. CAP is rushing towards the reader/ZOMBIE HORDE tucked in behind his shield like a human bullet charging in.
Panel 2. Bird’s eye view of CAP carving a path through the ZOMBIE HORDE, zombies are flying through the air to the left and right in his wake.
SFX (ZOMBIENESS):
Argh, AHHH Ugghhh
SFX (CAP CHARGING THROUGH):
THOOOOOOMMM
Panel 3. A ZOMBIE is rushing up behind CAP, who has finally come to a stop.
ZOMBIE:
Ewhhhhh
Panel 4. Action panel of CAP reacting, his shield is slicing through the head of the ZOMBIE down through its body, splitting it along the way.
SFX:
Swooosshh
Panel 5. CAP is still in his follow through position from cutting the ZOMBIE in half from panel 4, but he is looking to the right of the panel where there is a line of ZOMBIES coming at him.
Panel 6. CAP is throwing his shield to the RIGHT of the panel towards the line of ZOMBIES.
SFX:
Thwhoooshhh
PAGE THREE
(6 Panels)
Panel 1. Side shot silhouette panel of CAP’S shield slicing all of the lined up ZOMBIE’S heads off.
SFX (SHIELD):
Whoooosshhh
SFX (MULTIPLE HEADS BEING LOPPED OFF):
Thunk, Thwip, Shwip, Ugghhh, Ahhh
Panel 2. A shield-less CAP is punching/crushing a ZOMBIE’S head, causing enough cranial damage to put it down.
SFX:
KRAK
Panel 3. A particularly huge nasty looking ZOMBIE is coming at CAP/reader, you can see CAP’S shield returning to him in the background.
ZOMBIE:
RAAAHHHH!!!!
Panel 4. CAP’S shield is cutting through the back of the ZOMBIE and coming through the front of him.
ZOMBIE:
RAAARGGGHHH
SFX (SHIELD)
Kwhooosh
Panel 5. View from the eyes of the ZOMBIE on the ground. CAP is standing over him looking down, he has his shield raised over his head as if he is getting ready to slam it down on the ZOMBIE’S head.
CAP:
AHHHHHHH
Panel 6. Smaller panel of CAP’S shield crushing the ZOMBIE head. Illustrate this as graphic or artsy as you’d like.
SFX (SKULL CRUSHING):
QRRSSHHHHH
Panel 7. CAP is standing with the front of his shield showing, the shield has ZOMBIE skull leftovers on it. There are ZOMBIE’S piled around his feet.
CAP:
You’re next Skull!
Thanks for reading!!!