Ghost pgs!!

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Here's some pgs I finished recently using the old Dark Horse sample script.
pg1
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g136/newbs8/pg1_post-1.jpg
pg2
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g136/newbs8/pg2_post-1.jpg
pg3
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g136/newbs8/pg3_post-1.jpg
pg4
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g136/newbs8/pg4_post-1.jpg

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pg5
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g136/newbs8/pg5_post.jpg
some warm up sketches for this
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g136/newbs8/ghost_marker.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g136/newbs8/ghost2.jpg

what do think?
what works?
what doesn't work?
How could it be improved?
thanks for looking!

[Shade101]

You're very talented! Great work on the varying angles you've captured.

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shade- thanks man!