'The Singer' 5 page finished story

[Adamda]

This is a five page story I did inspired by the lyrics to Nick Cave's song The Singer.

This is the first story I fully finished from beginning to end, fully inked and lettered, so any feedback would be great.

Thanks!

-Adam

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v681/oysterboy59/Page1-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v681/oysterboy59/Page2-1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v681/oysterboy59/Page3-1.jpg

[Adamda]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v681/oysterboy59/Page4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v681/oysterboy59/Page5.jpg