Superman Song

[Jonesie]

I wanted to post a song that I wrote about Superman, I would greatly appreciate feedback.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4GVWP66sB8

[DonC]

That was really good. I was actually surprised.

[Hellstormer]

That was awesome , you should try foing one of Batman. :D

[DarKye]

Wow, just wow. That was amazing, and I don't even like Superman.

Any chance we can get the lyrics written down and/or a MP3?

[jeangreydp]

Good song.

You had me up until Lana Lang ;)

[Hellstormer]

Wow, just wow. That was amazing, and I don't even like Superman.

Any chance we can get the lyrics written down and/or a MP3?
http://s2.mediaconverter.org/converted/11986417224211930youtube.mp3

Don't ask.

[Jonesie]

http://s2.mediaconverter.org/converted/11986417224211930youtube.mp3

Don't ask.


Thank You, that was awesome of you.

and here are the lyrics


I keep searching, day and night
For a way I can be by your side
But theres one thing you don't understand
I am not an ordinary man
I have the power to fly through the stars
I'd give it all up for just one night in your arms

When I'm with you I feel so weak
I can't eat no and I can't sleep
You feel just like Kryptonite
But if you killed me girl I wouldn't mind

This is the way I feel
It's so hard to be the Man of Steel
All I want is a little love in my life
I can't have this no matter how hard I try

Well hey there Miss Lana Lang (Lois Lane)*
I want to tell you just one thing
If I can't find a way to be by your side
I'm gonna love you till the end of time
All these feelings I can't understand
I supposed to be some sort of Superman

When I'm with you I feel so weak
I can't eat no and I can't sleep
You feel just like Kryptonite
But if you killed me girl I wouldn't mind

This is the way I feel
It's so hard to be the Man of Steel
All I want is a little love in my life
I can't have this no matter how hard I try




* I wrote the song on a dare to write a song about Smallville, but the two names can be changed accordingly, would you guys like me to record an alternate version using Lois Lane

[666MasterOfPuppets]

That was pretty good, Jonesie. I was surprised. And welcome to the boards.

[David Atkins]

Very cool, Jonesie. I like your sound.