Fuyuoka-A Superman/Love Hina fusion

[AJTalon]

Basically I explain Keitaro's invulnerability by him being Kryptonian. His universe's Last Son of Krypton. I'm thinking of revising a lot of it but I'd like to hear what you guys have to say on it:

Fuyuoka (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2450950/1/Fuyuoka)

Note: Fuyuoka is the name of the hometown of Keitaro's Japanese voice actor, which is why I chose it.

[Saint_007]

Wow... interesting theory...

Though if we were to put the laws of comic relief aside (i.e. "When a woman hits in anger, the target of her anger will be sent flying with such force that he practically gets free air travel and the woman's fists/weapon of choice will not even be dented"), the next time Naru (or hell, anyone else for that matter) slaps him, she's going to wind up with a broken arm. Though Keitaro has effectively shown that he does get injured at times.

Though the potential for hilarity with X-ray vision is great! Not to mention every time Keitaro gets a nosebleed he practically punches holes in concrete (Kryptonian biology = extremely powerful heartbeat = immense blood pressure capable of acting like a super-powered sandblaster). And don't get me started on the times he get clumsy and trips on his feet. He'd basically be smashing through bathroom and bedroom walls :D :D :D

[AJTalon]

Wow... interesting theory...

Though if we were to put the laws of comic relief aside (i.e. "When a woman hits in anger, the target of her anger will be sent flying with such force that he practically gets free air travel and the woman's fists/weapon of choice will not even be dented"), the next time Naru (or hell, anyone else for that matter) slaps him, she's going to wind up with a broken arm. Though Keitaro has effectively shown that he does get injured at times.

Though the potential for hilarity with X-ray vision is great! Not to mention every time Keitaro gets a nosebleed he practically punches holes in concrete (Kryptonian biology = extremely powerful heartbeat = immense blood pressure capable of acting like a super-powered sandblaster). And don't get me started on the times he get clumsy and trips on his feet. He'd basically be smashing through bathroom and bedroom walls :D :D :D

On the "Law of Comic Relief" (LOL); Keitaro in my fic is basically moving away from the blow to avoid anyone getting hurt. He's a very good actor, Keitaro, mainly because he doesn't want to hurt or kill anyone. Though in throwing himself out of the house he's definitely overdoing it.

Yes, he has been injured a few times in the anime. I just say that there are a few "meteor rocks" (kryptonite) lying around, heh. Probably souveniers brought by Keitaro's family when they visited the inn in the past.

LOL, a super-nosebleed... Now THAT would be an interesting way to fight female supervillains, heh.

I was caught between having Jor-El act like the Eradicator (or the Smallville Jor-El) or having him be the benevolent Jor-El like in the comics, movies or animated series. I try to pass off the whole "rule over them with might" thing with Keitaro not quite getting the translation right. However, this is an issue.

I was also tempted to have Granny Hina show up a few times with Kanako to basically verbally abuse Keitaro (as in Japan some traditional families dislike the idea of adopted children-Unless they're of the proper background and so forth). A strained relationship with his grandmother is a good reason (in my mind) for Granny Hina to not tell Keitaro that the inn has become a girl's dorm. She did it out of spite basically. This was a line I would have pursued if I hadn't lost interest in the story.

[Froggy]

wow....and i thought this was some rumbles idea that was just.......some rumbles idea! good stuff

[AJTalon]

wow....and i thought this was some rumbles idea that was just.......some rumbles idea! good stuff

Thanks, though I really need a good editor for the story to try and make it cleaner.

I'm working on a sequel to it as well, to make a Justice League of Anime as it were. The Flash is Ramba Suu, Suu's big brother. Sakaki from Azumanga Daioh is Wonder Woman (thanks to Cologne from Ranma 1/2), and a few other heroes and villains will appear. Any thoughts on that?

... Actually, now that I think about it I should have probably given Keitaro more solo adventures as Superman before starting on a Justice League. Oi...