Tahko's first attempt at drawing

[Tahko Tetsujin]

Yeah it's me, I did it from GIMP and I used a picture of myself for reference.

I didn't know where else to put it for critique so I put it here. Please bear in mind that This is the first time I've tried something like this.
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1527/toontahkogt3.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=toontahkogt3.jpg)http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6229/self2007dj1.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=self2007dj1.jpg)

[zuludelta]

Looks pretty good. That's a pretty long thumbnail though, that thing might scare away the ladies.