Toku King
07-04-2007, 05:24 PM
The idea's been floating around in numerous threads, but this thread is for official advancements of where the comic and creation are formed into one epic story!
The origin: Max Pem is an ordinary guy. He goes to school, has a crush, does his work, and has some issues. Probblem is, the issues are coming in too close at once. His leechy uncle is trying to control his mother's life, his father's always busy, violent bullies from another school are harassing him and his friends every day when they get dropped off of the bus, a girl he has a major crush on is one of his best friends, and he's always feeling as if he should do more than he can.
One day, a meteor hits the earth. Discovered to carry a very rare form of radiation, it is taken to the labs for study. The leader of the study is Professor Harold Pem, Max's dad.
Harold decides that he can make up for when he's not there by giving his son the first look at this extraordinary item.
While Prof. Pem leaves to see the minters, Max can barely see the rock from such a high up room. So, he does the obvious thing and goes down the stairs to get a closer look. He gets down there to realize that it's the same room as the meteor! Suddenly, the space rock releases a gray form of energy that splits into black and white.
Max feels his head spinning and his mind splitting into two. He lies to his dad and says that he saw nothing, and the sweating's "just from a fever".
The next day, Max begins to change. He feels stronger, and actually takes down the other school bullies in one punch!
While walking to school, Max notices a robbery in progress. Soon, a hidden side of him breaks free, and gets ready to rush in head first. Soon, this feeling strengthens, and his body turns into a taller, bigger muscled, completely white being with pitch black eyes. Somehow, he feels safe in this transformation.
"That's what I'm talking about!" he shouts in joy.
To be continued.......
The overview will continue with every advancement in the comic script.
The origin: Max Pem is an ordinary guy. He goes to school, has a crush, does his work, and has some issues. Probblem is, the issues are coming in too close at once. His leechy uncle is trying to control his mother's life, his father's always busy, violent bullies from another school are harassing him and his friends every day when they get dropped off of the bus, a girl he has a major crush on is one of his best friends, and he's always feeling as if he should do more than he can.
One day, a meteor hits the earth. Discovered to carry a very rare form of radiation, it is taken to the labs for study. The leader of the study is Professor Harold Pem, Max's dad.
Harold decides that he can make up for when he's not there by giving his son the first look at this extraordinary item.
While Prof. Pem leaves to see the minters, Max can barely see the rock from such a high up room. So, he does the obvious thing and goes down the stairs to get a closer look. He gets down there to realize that it's the same room as the meteor! Suddenly, the space rock releases a gray form of energy that splits into black and white.
Max feels his head spinning and his mind splitting into two. He lies to his dad and says that he saw nothing, and the sweating's "just from a fever".
The next day, Max begins to change. He feels stronger, and actually takes down the other school bullies in one punch!
While walking to school, Max notices a robbery in progress. Soon, a hidden side of him breaks free, and gets ready to rush in head first. Soon, this feeling strengthens, and his body turns into a taller, bigger muscled, completely white being with pitch black eyes. Somehow, he feels safe in this transformation.
"That's what I'm talking about!" he shouts in joy.
To be continued.......
The overview will continue with every advancement in the comic script.