Holy Jo!

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These are the first two pages of a new comic I am working on which I am going to post here for constructive critism before I publish it.
The bumpf that goes at the begining on the comic will read something like this:

'It is 1961 and a new hero has been born in the shape of Holy Jo. Young, idealistic and with a clear sense of right and wrong, he should be the perfect super-hero, Britain's savour from all that is evil. Shouldn't he...?'

These two pages are in a different style to most of the comic, as you will see when I publish some more pages.
http://a495.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/10/l_accbfe94870861fca006f0d1fa4251de.jpg
http://a337.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/25/l_6061bab18fc8cd85f774ffe599bab280.jpg

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doesn't anyone have anything to say about it? good or bad...

[Pro]

Generally speaking it's not a good idea to let readers in on what's going on behind the scenes before the story has even started. But you may have a reason for doing so.
The art style isn't typical of comics but i think you're going for parody anyway so that might not pose a problem.

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Your right, the begining section is parodyish it will become clearly as the story unfolds. There is a reason for outlining the story at the begining.
Comments gratfully recieved.
Here's page three:
http://a666.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_e9a26e4d7b57f7dd5c21d19057a69139.jpg