All Star Superman - A Fanfic

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Hey people.

Just wanted to tell you all that I've been working on a Superman fanfic for quite a while now, and although it's far from finished, I decided to publish it.

I really, REALLY hope you give it a read and post your comments not only there, but here as well.

The link: http://z6.invisionfree.com/All_STAR_DC_UNIVERSE/index.php?showtopic=2

You'll notice familiar quotes and references from Superman: The Movie, Superman Returns and Kingdom Come. Nevertheless, I've done my darnedest to make this an original story. I called the story "Tides Of Destiny".

First part's up. I'll be waiting for your comments.

[Kara Zor El]

666MasterOfPuppets, this is great. The history of Krypton that you have created, should be cannon. The Civil War. Jor-El in hiding, the legends, are all superb.
I look forward to reading more.
You have set up the story very well, with a great sense of purpose.
Bravo.

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Hey Kara! Glad that you liked it and that you posted a comment there.

Like I said in that thread, I sincerely hope to live up to your expectations.

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Hey people! Part 2 is up!

Hope you all like it.

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Remember: if you want to give it a read, just hit the link in my sig.

[Kara Zor El]

I'll have to read it tomorrow, as I've been out all day and my head needs the pillow. So I'll give it a read then and post my thoughts. Looking forawrd to it.:)

[Froggy]

So good so far. Part one put a lot of cool stuff into krypton. I like this version of Jor-el..........about to read part 2

part 2 was intriguing. I eagerly await part 3

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Thanx for the kind replies, people. They are greatly appreciated.

Part two was just to, somehow, set the tone of the initial chapters. Specifically, to let you guys know how Big Blue feels at the time of the beginning of the story.

I just hope to always keep you interested, and to not disappoint you.

Part 3 will be up this weekend.

[Froggy]

Thanx for the kind replies, people. They are greatly appreciated.

Part two was just to, somehow, set the tone of the initial chapters. Specifically, to let you guys know how Big Blue feels at the time of the beginning of the story.

I just hope to always keep you interested, and to not disappoint you.

Part 3 will be up this weekend. I'll be waiting

[Kara Zor El]

I can't find part 2???:(

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Hey Kara! The link's updated. Sorry for the inconvenience.

[Kara Zor El]

Hey Kara! The link's updated. Sorry for the inconvenience.


Found it thanks -

And it's incredible. Wasn't expecting such emotion and such a big dramatic event right from the word go. Love his opening speach about what he can do, very poetic. And as for Triton.... wow.

How about having Supes collect every bit of dust and put it all back together at the end of the story? That's if he comes to terms with things at the end.

[Phenom]

i can't find DWES so i have a proposal. Since we are getting little activity and there no ways i can design a quality board with a logo how bout we start a new site. You keep your Stories 666 and if anybody can make a cool presentation for ouur new site contact me and of cours I can't take admin duites I'm only there every other week.

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Found it thanks -

And it's incredible. Wasn't expecting such emotion and such a big dramatic event right from the word go. Love his opening speach about what he can do, very poetic. And as for Triton.... wow.

How about having Supes collect every bit of dust and put it all back together at the end of the story? That's if he comes to terms with things at the end.

Actually, that's an idea that's beyond coolness, Kara. It's simply incredible stuff. Thanx for contributing.

[666MasterOfPuppets]

i can't find DWES so i have a proposal. Since we are getting little activity and there no ways i can design a quality board with a logo how bout we start a new site. You keep your Stories 666 and if anybody can make a cool presentation for ouur new site contact me and of cours I can't take admin duites I'm only there every other week.

Well, have you tried to send him an e-mail?

As for the presentation, I'd go to the DC wallpaper thread. The guys there can desgin the coolest presentations ever. You just post the images you want to be used (high quality), and that's all.

[Kara Zor El]

Actually, that's an idea that's beyond coolness, Kara. It's simply incredible stuff. Thanx for contributing.

You're welcome. It's a real silver age type feat that only Superman could do.

[Phenom]

i've emailed him called his house and his cell it's beyond weird but he does annoying stuff like this frequenlty

[666MasterOfPuppets]

You're welcome. It's a real silver age type feat that only Superman could do.

Agreed. "This looks like a job for Superman!"

i've emailed him called his house and his cell it's beyond weird but he does annoying stuff like this frequenlty

I see. Did you make the request at the DC wallpaper thread?

[Lissilambe]

Well, perhaps not 'only Superman'.

I feel this segment was a little detached for reading. It was supposed to be a powerfully emotional scene, but it seemed kind of...distant. I didn't connect. And at the same time, perhaps too overwrought as well.

For some reason, this nearly-insane level of grief seems just so out of whack for Superman. It's not like he's not lost people he loves in the past. And of course, in relationship to the prologue you gave, if Kryptonians really do go around blowing up mons and cosmic satellites at emotional points, I guess we can see why the universe might not like having them around ;)

Good luck as you develop you story. Keep at it.

Take care
Don

[666MasterOfPuppets]

Hehehe :D... Thanx for reading, Lissilambe.

As for that scene, if Big Blue split a moon in half when Luthor was elected president, I don't think it's too much out of character to do what he did this time.

And yeah, perhaps I could have described that scene a little bit more, but well, it's already posted. Perhaps I'll add something if I publish it somewhere else.

Again, thanx for reading and contributing.