Daredevil Sequentials

[BearClaw]

Here's my latest sample package to Marvel. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

http://bearclawstudios.com/ForumArt2/DareDevilPG1.jpg

http://bearclawstudios.com/ForumArt2/DareDevilPG2.jpg

http://bearclawstudios.com/ForumArt2/DareDevilPG3.jpg

http://bearclawstudios.com/ForumArt2/DareDevilPG4.jpg

[CapnSpandex]

First off: Killer stuff. Its got a relatively consistent style, and that's always a plus in sequential art.

The only issues stem from perhaps too many "straight-ahead" panels - try mixing it up - overhead shots during a simple talking sequence in the law offices, shots from below to convey a feeling of power. The only other problem I see is some simple anatomy issues: Matt's left hand in the first panel, and his hand on Foggy's shoulder three panels later. Also, his right leg once he's suited up as Daredevil on page two isn't quite properly foreshortened. I love page three, with the calm shot followed by an exact duplicate, but with Daredevil bursting through the window to nail the bad guy. Incredible stuff - thanks for sharing and keep at it!

[howyadoin]

The first thing that catches my eye is the hairstyles - first off, they're too similar, and more significantly, they're very dated-looking.

[Aggie]

my only suggestion it to be cognizant of panel space, because of balloons and boxes that will eventually be added...it looks great though, i especially like the last 2 panels of the second page...good luck!

[TJ Maxwell]

Your action sequences are good, but your faces are very static, especially the woman's on the first page. All your men are wearing the same jaw-jutting-forward expression.

[Kara Zor El]

Excellent work. But I agree with Aggie. You should be proud of this work. I hope you get what you want, if comic book artist is your desire that is. The more you do - the better you'll get.

[BearClaw]

Thanks, everyone! I almost forgot I posted this here. It was almost a week before anyone responded, I just forgot about it.

But, Thanks! I appreciate all the comments and critiques! I'll try to work on the things you all mentioned. Thanks again!:)