My first comic, it's a drama/horror/fantasy epic. Feedback encouraged.

[ZacharyLovesYou]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b27/ZacharyxBinks/zackscomicsmallcopywithtextcopy.jpg

[ZacharyLovesYou]

Well, got bored again... Spent a little more time on the art.

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w30/ZacharyLovesYou/zackscomiczombiefinalcopyflipsl.jpg

[Kara Zor El]

Love the zombie with the flies around his head.
You have a basic style here that is very comicy rather than the realism one would tend to expect from the type of genre you are doing. Your style is accomplished though, maybe some backgrounds would enrich it a little. Mist behind the zombie, and some building's in other panels or whatever. But definitely some scenery or even just a bit of dotting or crosshatching.
You'd need to use speech bubbles then.
They are funny by the way.

[ZacharyLovesYou]

Love the zombie with the flies around his head.
You have a basic style here that is very comicy rather than the realism one would tend to expect from the type of genre you are doing. Your style is accomplished though, maybe some backgrounds would enrich it a little. Mist behind the zombie, and some building's in other panels or whatever. But definitely some scenery or even just a bit of dotting or crosshatching.
You'd need to use speech bubbles then.
They are funny by the way.

Yeah, I'm going to eventually start doing some more detailed work. All of the stuff here was done in like, 10-15 minutes. I'm just sort of getting a feel for doing sequential art.