Captain Marvel T-shirt design

[The_Spirit]

Since I like "Monster Society of Evil" so much, I decided I wanted to make a t-shirt that depicted it down at the local t-shirt printing shop. So I made this. I drew the bolt myself in paint, and I used the font from "The Goonies" for the front letters, since it simulated the font used in the words "Monster Society of Evil" close enough for me. This is going to be on a red shirt, so the letters on the front of the shirt will stand out more. The phrase translates from MSOE encrypting into "SAY THE MAGIC WORD!" The font on the back I lifted straight from the cover of MSOE #1, and outlined it in black myself (painstaking!!).

Feel free to opine with any constructive criticisms.

Front:

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m209/netstuff27/MSOEShirtFront1.png

Back:

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m209/netstuff27/MSOEShirtBack1.png

[The_Spirit]

I guess that by the amount of views this thread has gotten versus it's ZERO replies, that this sucks?

[Pól Rua]

I'd recommend a black border around the Monster Society code-phrase, and you've got the lightning bolt straight up and down. It should be tilted a little.

[Paul Render]

The back lettering and stuff looks real cool, but that front is way boring.

[The_Spirit]

Well, imagine it against a red background.