My comic idea! Qezel:The Trinity Origin #1-2 Please Tell Me What You Think!

[Seanocs'o dy Derioth]

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[Seanocs'o dy Derioth]

anyone? Is there anyone that would like to repl eor help me out?

[Matches_Malone_X]

I like the story of origin one, but i like the concept of origin 2. Origin one sounds similar to the backstory of a charcter in my story, you have developed it much more than me though.

If I had to choose though I would say 1, simply because the character sould have alot more internal conflict as to his almost triple identity (human/angel/devil), makes for some very cool stories.

[Paul Render]

I voted #2, but isn't this whole God/Devil warrior lineage thing played out? Even at the big two (marvel/dc), the characters that have the same kind of links have a hard time keeping their audience? Unless you are targeting a christian audience which means go ahead and do whatever you want.

[Seanocs'o dy Derioth]

I like the story of origin one, but i like the concept of origin 2. Origin one sounds similar to the backstory of a charcter in my story, you have developed it much more than me though.

If I had to choose though I would say 1, simply because the character sould have alot more internal conflict as to his almost triple identity (human/angel/devil), makes for some very cool stories.

Well for origin 2 I'ts only part one I will eventually get to it where Jadiah(Qezel)the main character is having conflicts on Earth.

[Kara Zor El]

I think origin one is the strongest. I'd go with that one. It has more of an epic feel, but both are epic. I think it needs something more though. I think you need a powerful third party. Something other than Hell based or heaven based. Something from before even God. Something mysterious that is coming back, but needs Chris to become fully real and destroy everything.

[Seanocs'o dy Derioth]

I think origin one is the strongest. I'd go with that one. It has more of an epic feel, but both are epic. I think it needs something more though. I think you need a powerful third party. Something other than Hell based or heaven based. Something from before even God. Something mysterious that is coming back, but needs Chris to become fully real and destroy everything.

What is the second on emissing?