Looking for advice on how to improve this Hulk picture

[Crimson]

First Draft: http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e145/Crimbo88/Hulk1.png

Edit:
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e145/Crimbo88/Hulkedit.png

I still feel the head is a bit generic and the right leg is off. Any advice?

Yeah, I know I posted last night asking for tutorials but a weird thing happened... I couldn't sleep ALL NIGHT but at around 6 I picked up a pencil and came up with a picture which for my standards is pretty impressive.

However there is still alot of things that could be improved on it. I can see the weak areas but I don't know how to correct them myself. I've tried.

So, can you lot help me out with advice and tips on what and how to improve it?

My nephew loves The Hulk so I would love if I could perfect this picture, ink and then colour it as a gift for him.

Thanks for any and all help.

[JAM_ONIT]

I would find a pre-existing pose from any hero or villain, then find a muscle magazine picture and use it as a reference, and mix them it into your own hulk.

here's some pics I use just to get an idea of how muscles that size can look
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c106/JAM_ONIT/fc30.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c106/JAM_ONIT/124.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c106/JAM_ONIT/fcd3ba23.jpg
or maybe a she-hulk
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c106/JAM_ONIT/4.jpg
hope these ideas help some, remember copying another artist pose/anatomical arrangement is not a crime.

[Jaye]

Looking at those photos, I would advise you to make the head larger. But really, its a great start!